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Message de stefdefrance posté le 19-05-2006 à 16:09:10 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,

J'ai un mail à envoyer à des amis de mon amie (anglaise). Pour ma part je debute. Pourriez-vous me dire si mon mail est écrit correctement et si il y a des fautes me les expliquer s'il vous plait.

Par avance merci.

hi there,

I'm sure it's a surprise for you but for this time, it's not Annie who's writing to you...

Juste a little note to tell you that I created a gallery with all our pictures on the web and give you the adress.

I hope you will find the file where I put photos of our friends...

The house begins to look like something nice but there were still many works to do. As Annie has finished to stick tiles on the bathroom wall, we began to paint the kitchen with a very nice yellow. As soon as possible, I'm going to turn the attic into a bedroom for Vincent and my children (Alexy and Manon). It will be much better for them to have a big bedroom...
I have to renovate the front of our little house too... I never did that before and I'm sure that it's going to be great moment for me.
So, you understand that I don't have the time to be bored.

We begin to book the hols for this summer, We want to visit the French landscape, perharps Auvergne, because we're fed up with tanning on the beach. For august, as we will haven't got children (YIPPEE !!!!) we'd like to visit a brother of mine who lives in the southern French Alps.

That all for this time...

Hope to read you soon

Have a good surf.

Stephane

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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-05-2006 17:16
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Réponse: Est ce que je n'ai pas fait de faute de magmatic_rock, postée le 19-05-2006 à 23:05:34 (S | E)
Hello,

une petite aide mais pas sur à 100%

Hi there,

I'm sure it's a surprise for you but for this time /I guess it must be a surprise, it's not Annie who's writing (je dirais plus "write") to you...

Juste a little note (note = short letter donc little est inutile) to tell you that I created made up a gallery with all our pictures on the web. andI'll give you the adress.

I hope you will find the file /attachment (double clique dessus et regarde la 4ème traduction, tu comprendra pourquoi ce mot est plus emplyé par un anglophone) where I put photos of our friends...

The house begins to look like something nice but there were is (où alors si c'est au passé le but ne va pas ici!) still many works to do. As Annie has finished to stick fix tiles on the bathroom wall(pas sur de la construction là mais je ne sais pas trop comment dire sinon), we began to paint the kitchen with a very nice yellow. As soon as possible, I'm going to turn the attic into a bedroom for Vincent and my children (Alexy and Manon). It will be much better for them to have They'll have a bigger bedroom...
I have to renovate the front of our little house too... I've never did done that before and I'm sure that it's going to be a great moment for me.
So, you can understand that I don't have the time to be/get (les deux sont possibles) bored.

We begin to book the hols(pas compris du tout là ) for this summer, We want to visit the French landscape, perharps Auvergne, because we're fed up with tanning on the beach (I didn't know there were beaches in Paris). It is expected for august/we might leave in August, as we will haven't won't have got the children (YIPPEE !!!!) we'd like to visit a brother of mine who lives in the southern French Alps.

That all for this time...

Hope to read you soon

Have a good surf.(qu'as-tu voulu dire?

Stephane

Hope this helps a bit

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Réponse: Est ce que je n'ai pas fait de faute de moumounette, postée le 20-05-2006 à 20:51:37 (S | E)
merci c'était super !

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