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Message de crichou posté le 06-02-2007 à 18:57:03 (S | E | F | I)
hello,
I am French, I must send a covering letter in English for a job. Could somebody read it and correct my mistakes?
Message de crichou posté le 06-02-2007 à 18:57:03 (S | E | F | I)
hello,
I am French, I must send a covering letter in English for a job. Could somebody read it and correct my mistakes?
Réponse: good covering letter de jean31, postée le 06-02-2007 à 19:18:41 (S | E)
We just CAN'T read it if you don't send it!
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Modifié par bridg le 06-02-2007 19:19*
LA logique de Jean a encore frappé
Réponse: good covering letter de bridg, postée le 06-02-2007 à 19:19:09 (S | E)
Bonjour.
Vous postez ici des éléments de votre lettre, en retirant les noms , et nous la corrigerons sur le forum si elle n'est pas trop longue.
Cordialement
Réponse: good covering letter de crichou, postée le 06-02-2007 à 20:07:40 (S | E)
Thank you very much. Here my covering letter for a job as Treasury Accountant.
Dear Sir, Madam,
I am writing to apply for the post of Treasury Accountant, advertised on website of Monster.
As you will see in my enclosed CV, I have nearly five years of experience as this function, including two years as a personal assistant of the Treasurer. I thus could acquire solids competences in this field. I was responsible for the recording of bank statements and reconciliation of these banking writings and those of accounting. I prepared internal audit for the external auditor. Being the Assistant Treasurer, I took charge to balance accounts, to prepare and make payments invoice suppliers, wages, social contributions, Value-Added Tax...I assisted the Treasurer for the reporting: we checked budgeted figures and those really carried out and we made report for the Chief Financial Officer and the headquarter. I was constantly in contact with banks and financial partners and supervised a small team.
I have decided to undertake a Master1 in “Sciences du Management” specialized in financial management in order to obtain more diplomas and more knowledge in the fields of finance and accounting.
I am attracted by the fields which calls for the analysis, logic and mathematics and I think thus to fit to the person that you seek.
Your company is a $5.7 billion global manufacturer and marketer of consumer and commercial products with a powerful brand family including Paper Mate, DYMO, Waterman, Rubbermaid, Goody.... You offer durable and innovative products that help simplify the lives of people everyday. I think that I can be an asset for your company because I can be able to reduce costs . Indeed I could recommend to you alternatives to reduce banking fees, in particular by automating more and more the means of payment, by making play competition between banks...
I am serious, organized and I invest fully in the missions which are entrusted to me. In addition, of conscientious nature, I have the capacity to adapt easily to new contexts and I have a good team spirit.
I can be available for interview over the phone at your convenience, and look forward to hearing from you.
Réponse: good covering letter de jean31, postée le 06-02-2007 à 21:37:39 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Corrections et améliorations signalées en majuscules.
Supprimer ce que j'ai mis entre (...).
N'étant pas spécialiste de ton domaine, loin s'en faut, peut-être reste-t-il des choses à améliorer.
Attend d'autres avis, au moins un second puisque...
Dear Sir OR Madam,
I am writing to apply for the post of Treasury Accountant, advertised on Monster website.
As you will see in my enclosed CV, I have nearly five years (of) experience (as) IN this (function) POST, including two years as a personal assistant (of) TO the Treasurer. I thus could acquire solid(s) competences in this field. I was responsible for the recording of bank statements and reconciliation of these banking writings and those of accounting. I prepared internal audit for the external auditor. Being the Assistant Treasurer, I (took) HAD charge (to) OF balancING accounts, (to) preparING and makING payments invoice suppliers, wages, social contributions, Value-Added Tax...I assisted the Treasurer for the reporting: we checked budgeted figures and those really carried out and we made A report for the Chief Financial Officer and the headquarterS. I was constantly in contact with banks and financial partners and supervised a small team.
I have decided to (undertake) SET ABOUT a Master1 in “Sciences du Management” specialized in financial management in order to obtain more diplomas and more knowledge in the fields of finance and accounting.
I am attracted by the fields which calls(s) for (the) analysis, logic and mathematics and THEREFORE I think (thus to fit to the person that you seek) I CAN MEET YOUR REQUIREMENTS.
Your company is a $5.7 billion global manufacturer and marketer of consumer and commercial products with a powerful brand family including Paper Mate, DYMO, Waterman, Rubbermaid, Goody.... You offer durable and innovative products that help simplify the lives of people every day. I think that I can be an asset for your company because I can (be able to) reduce costs. Indeed I could recommend to you alternatives to reduce banking fees, in particular by automating more and more the means of payment, by (making play) PROMOTING/ACTIVATING competition between banks...
I am serious, organized and I (invest fully) PUT A LOT OF EFFORT inTO FULFILLING the missions which are entrusted to me. In addition, (of) conscientious natureD, I have the capacity to adapt easily to new contexts and I have a good team spirit.
I can be available for interview over the phone at your convenience, and look forward to hearing from you.
YOURS SINCERELY
* Good luck for your future job.
Réponse: good covering letter de crichou, postée le 06-02-2007 à 21:44:58 (S | E)
je te remercie beaucoup d'avoir pris le temps de jeter un oeil. Je vais voir si d'autres personnes vont donner leur avis. encore merci!
Réponse: good covering letter de jean31, postée le 06-02-2007 à 21:46:15 (S | E)
You're
, crichou.
INDISPENSABLES : 