Message de bamoo posté le 2004-10-24 17:09:44 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
j'aimerais faire un stage en Angleterre à la fin de l'année pour améliorer mon anglais.
J'ai donc fait une lettre de motivation (covering letter). Je mets les passages donc je ne suis pas sûr. Pouvez vous me dire ce qui vous semble incorrect, ou même me conseiller pour certaines améliorations :

Fond of new technologies, I am studing computing since 3 years. My first year of specialisation at X has given me a lot of experience in computing, but also in English or in other domain (speaking with the public for example).
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As X student, I must do a work placement for 3 months (starting on June) and I would like do it in your company because I know you have already employed X students and moreover, your company seems to me be the good choice to reach my goals. Indeed, I would like to discover britain's work culture. It could be a great advandtage latter for my next jobs, especially because your company is an international company.

As you can see from my enclosed CV, I have already good knowledges about computing . I can add that I am fond of computing, that's why I am member of several computing group at X.
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Moreover, my short work experience in the entreprise world has developped a lot of skills, particularly team work, and I think that I could bring ideas and enthusiasm to the job.

I really think I could bring something to your company and learnt a lot about your way of work, especially in you company, who seems to me one the best of the sector.

I look forward to hearing from you.

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Edité par bridg le 24-10-2004 17:11