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Message de sarah971 posté le 18-09-2017 à 21:12:12 (S | E | F)
Good morning !
Could you help me to correct my summary please ?
Thank you
The document is about the French economy and more specifically how many families control it. This question is raised in a book intitled Les 100 000 Familles written by Cyrille Chevrillon, a French financer and business school professor. Indeed, he explains that, actually, the economic power is held by around 100 000 families who own a huge part of French companies and generate more than half of the national's gross domestic product.
According to the author, the French government should encourage family business because they have some advantages contrary to non-family firms.
Besides, he adds that they are the solution to the country's economic growth issue.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-09-2017 22:13
Message de sarah971 posté le 18-09-2017 à 21:12:12 (S | E | F)
Good morning !
Could you help me to correct my summary please ?
Thank you
The document is about the French economy and more specifically how many families control it. This question is raised in a book intitled Les 100 000 Familles written by Cyrille Chevrillon, a French financer and business school professor. Indeed, he explains that, actually, the economic power is held by around 100 000 families who own a huge part of French companies and generate more than half of the national's gross domestic product.
According to the author, the French government should encourage family business because they have some advantages contrary to non-family firms.
Besides, he adds that they are the solution to the country's economic growth issue.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 18-09-2017 22:13
Réponse : Correction/ résumé de gerondif, postée le 18-09-2017 à 22:32:01 (S | E)
Bonsoir
L'adjectif national ne peut pas prendre 's du cas possessif, nation pourrait.
Réponse : Correction/ résumé de sarah971, postée le 18-09-2017 à 23:47:09 (S | E)
Hello ! Oui, en effet
The document is about the French economy and more specifically how many families control it. This question is raised in a book intitled Les 100 000 Familles written by Cyrille Chevrillon, a French financer and business school professor. Indeed, he explains that, actually, the economic power is held by around 100 000 families who own a huge part of French companies and generate more than half of the nation's gross domestic product.
According to the author, the French government should encourage family business because they have some advantages contrary to non-family firms.
Besides, he adds that they are the solution to the country's economic growth issue.
Réponse : Correction/ résumé de here4u, postée le 19-09-2017 à 23:18:12 (S | E)
Hello !
- book intitled Les 100 000 Familles
- a French financer
- around 100 000 families = 100, 000
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