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Message de joelle posté le 22-02-2018 à 22:32:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce mail s'il vous plait?
"Hello,
We arrive on Thursday March 1st at 5:50 pm at Terminal B of MCO International Airport by flight Lufthansa 464. The plane is very often late. Please keep us well the room we had booked for two nights.
Thank you very much.
See you soon."
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide.
C'est un message que je souhaite envoyer par mail.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2018 22:44
Message de joelle posté le 22-02-2018 à 22:32:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ce mail s'il vous plait?
"Hello,
We arrive on Thursday March 1st at 5:50 pm at Terminal B of MCO International Airport by flight Lufthansa 464. The plane is very often late. Please keep us well the room we had booked for two nights.
Thank you very much.
See you soon."
Merci beaucoup pour votre aide.
C'est un message que je souhaite envoyer par mail.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 22-02-2018 22:44
Réponse : Correction/mail de lucile83, postée le 23-02-2018 à 11:54:13 (S | E)
Hello
Bleu = à corriger
Vert = suggestions
"Hello,
We arrive on Thursday March 1st at 5:50 pm at Terminal B of MCO International Airport by flight Lufthansa 464. The plane is very often late. Please keep us well the room we had booked for two nights.
Thank you very much.
See you soon."
"Hello,
We'll arrive on Thursday March 1st at 5:50 pm at Terminal B of MCO International Airport by flight Lufthansa 464. The plane is very often late. Please make sure the room we booked for two nights will be available.
Thank you very much.
Regards."
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