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Message de martinm posté le 03-06-2018 à 08:29:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J’ai doit Je dois écrire sur un produit imaginaire (pas besoin de respecter les lois physiques). Pourriez-vous m’aider à corriger les possibles erreurs de grammaire ou d’expression s’il vous plaît?
Merci d’avance.
Writing
My product is a little device, its form is like an egg. This device allows someone get in a virtual world where you can live all experiences you want and in a short time.
To use this device, firstly you have to be in a quiet environment when you feel comfortable. You must put the device over a table and the camera must look your eyes. Next, the camera of the device will send a beam of light that will go through your eyes, and so the device will be able to communicate with your brain sending electrical pulses through beam of light, in this way the device can send information to your brain.
To choose the place where you want to go in the virtual world, you must simply think about the place. The device will detect this information from your brain, and it will make you think you are in that place. The intensity of the experience you live in the virtual world will change according to how you react to the stimuli that the device sends to your mind.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-06-2018 08:52
Message de martinm posté le 03-06-2018 à 08:29:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Merci d’avance.
Writing
My product is a little device, its form is like an egg. This device allows someone get in a virtual world where you can live all experiences you want and in a short time.
To use this device, firstly you have to be in a quiet environment when you feel comfortable. You must put the device over a table and the camera must look your eyes. Next, the camera of the device will send a beam of light that will go through your eyes, and so the device will be able to communicate with your brain sending electrical pulses through beam of light, in this way the device can send information to your brain.
To choose the place where you want to go in the virtual world, you must simply think about the place. The device will detect this information from your brain, and it will make you think you are in that place. The intensity of the experience you live in the virtual world will change according to how you react to the stimuli that the device sends to your mind.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-06-2018 08:52
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