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Message de acacias posté le 06-11-2018 à 22:32:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis une élève au collège et j'aimerais s'il vous plait votre aide pour regarder mon devoir et si possible me donner des idées pour l'améliorer.
Je vous remercie .
Mon prof d'anglais m'a conseillé d'aller sur ce site.
On weekdays I Airways wake up at seven o clock and met up at five past seven then I eat my breakfast. I go to the bathroom at quarter past seven it is very small. In the bathroom I have a shower I brush my hair ,and my teeth after that I get dressed then I go to school on foot.
Every monday at midday I go to the beekeeping club but every thursday I go to the choral.
In the afternoons after school I go back home. I come home and do my homework at about five o clock and at six o clock I play the violin and do pointe work. Every evening have dinner at ten past seven. I brush my teeth. After that I watch Tv at twenty to eight. I go to bed at half past eight. Iread from quarter to nine to ten o clock.
Every tuesday I have dance classes always from five o clock to twenty past nine I often eat at half pasr seven. I go home at ten o clock but every wednesday I have picture classes.
At weekends every saturday go to horse riding usually at nine o clock and I often go to the library at about three o clock.
On sunday do nothing except playing the violon aand reading a comic book.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-11-2018 22:48
Message de acacias posté le 06-11-2018 à 22:32:39 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je suis une élève au collège et j'aimerais s'il vous plait votre aide pour regarder mon devoir et si possible me donner des idées pour l'améliorer.
Je vous remercie .
Mon prof d'anglais m'a conseillé d'aller sur ce site.
On weekdays I Airways wake up at seven o clock and met up at five past seven then I eat my breakfast. I go to the bathroom at quarter past seven it is very small. In the bathroom I have a shower I brush my hair ,and my teeth after that I get dressed then I go to school on foot.
Every monday at midday I go to the beekeeping club but every thursday I go to the choral.
In the afternoons after school I go back home. I come home and do my homework at about five o clock and at six o clock I play the violin and do pointe work. Every evening have dinner at ten past seven. I brush my teeth. After that I watch Tv at twenty to eight. I go to bed at half past eight. Iread from quarter to nine to ten o clock.
Every tuesday I have dance classes always from five o clock to twenty past nine I often eat at half pasr seven. I go home at ten o clock but every wednesday I have picture classes.
At weekends every saturday go to horse riding usually at nine o clock and I often go to the library at about three o clock.
On sunday do nothing except playing the violon aand reading a comic book.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-11-2018 22:48
Réponse : Correction/ routine de laure95, postée le 07-11-2018 à 10:23:18 (S | E)
Bonjour,
On weekdays I Airways (ce mot n'existe pas) wake up at seven o clock and met up
at five past seven then I eat (on prend son petit déjeuner, on ne le mangee pas)my breakfast. I go to the bathroom at quarter past seven it is very small (qu'est ce qui est petit? La salle de bain?).
do pointe work: ?
Every evening (où est le sujet?) have dinner at ten past seven.
Iread (séparer ces 2 mots)
Every tuesday (majuscule) I have dance classes always f(always n'est pas à la bonne place) rom five o (') clock to twenty past nine
pasr
seven.I go (back)home at ten o clock
- picture classes: art classes.
every saturday: majuscule.
go to (pas de to) horse riding usually (usually n'est pas à la bonne place) at nine o clock
On sunday (majuscule)(où est le sujet?)do nothing except playing the violon aand reading a comic(s) book (enlever book)
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