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Message de anas41 posté le 14-11-2018 à 21:42:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je voudrais juste demander une correction pour la description d'une image.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
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Is a image which treaty probably to the Australian Stolen Generation.
In the bottom left-hand corner we can see a white hand is holding a paint roller.
On the neck there is the flag of australia.
The paint roller is painting in white but there is a hand which is paint in black however the background is black so i deduce the painter is trying to paint all in white.
I think that about this image the author would like to represent story to«the stolen generation ».
So the paint roller which painting in white symbolise the gouvernement of australia therefore it simbolise the white men even though the black hand symbolise the aborigines new generation.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-11-2018 22:02
Pas de majuscules intempestives, merci.
Message de anas41 posté le 14-11-2018 à 21:42:42 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
je voudrais juste demander une correction pour la description d'une image.
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
Lien internet
Is a image which treaty probably to the Australian Stolen Generation.
In the bottom left-hand corner we can see a white hand is holding a paint roller.
On the neck there is the flag of australia.
The paint roller is painting in white but there is a hand which is paint in black however the background is black so i deduce the painter is trying to paint all in white.
I think that about this image the author would like to represent story to«the stolen generation ».
So the paint roller which painting in white symbolise the gouvernement of australia therefore it simbolise the white men even though the black hand symbolise the aborigines new generation.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-11-2018 22:02
Pas de majuscules intempestives, merci.
Réponse : Correction/ description de vaiana, postée le 15-11-2018 à 00:55:57 (S | E)
Hello. Repostez votre texte corrigé des remarques ci-dessous en attendant qu'un autre membre prenne la relève please.
*Sujet manquant* is an image which
In the bottom left-hand corner we can see a white hand which/that is holding a paint roller.
On the neck there is the flag of Australia.
The paint roller is painting in white but there is a hand which is paint (utilisez le participe passé) in
I think
So the paint roller which xx painting in white symbolise (à conjuguer) the gouvernement (orthographe) of Australia. Therefore it simbolise (orthographe + conjugaison) the white men even though the black hand symbolise (conjugaison) the
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