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Message de yung97 posté le 02-12-2018 à 16:41:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un devoir,je sollicite votre aide pour corriger les fautes que je pourrais avoir fait,
merci d'avance !
1/ Ron Stallworth is not a black power activist despite the fact that he is very concerned by his community in the American society. The protagonist decided to not get involved of the black organization because he refused their violent and harsh speeches about policeman and the American policy in general. In my opinion, Ron changed a little indeed work as an undercover cop make him aware about the difficult life of black people. Nevertheless, he decided to still be a cop.
2/ Politics has not decided to develop a duty of remembrance so the general opinion is confused and wrong. That make mainstream America to think that the protest of African American are not justify. So when they tried to send a massage, they are conflicting people or traitor of the homeland. There is a process of conformism to create disciplined people.
3/ For me this is excessive but I can understand that point of view actually there is deference of treatment done by police officer. Those cops are killing blacks with no juridical problems (most of the time there are judged not guilty) : this phenomenon make blacks feel like there are second-class citizen such as we are back to the Jim Crow Era. With this extend we can justify this sentence.
4/ Consigne : do you think that film making book making or painting can be efficient political tools? Can you see any connection between individual statements and popular forms of protests?
The borders between art and politics are very narrow. When, you think about it you realised that politics is the art to convince people to think like you want. Then, art has an impact on people’s culture and actually in the way they think. Indeed, we can wonder us if art can be used for politics interests? And if there are links with personal statement and mass protests?
In fact, there is mutual influence between art and politics. Most of the time, the different forms of art are just mirrors of society in fact this is easier to paint what you see. That kind of situation are common, in “Les lettres persanes” Montesquieu just describes the French life thanks to fictive personages. But we can see in his book a discreet way to criticize the monarchy of France. In this way, artistic expression can make people aware of their conditions.
Art and politics are sometimes means to create thoughts and finally protests. Personal statements can impact the world and change mentalities. Ghandi with his statement nonviolence has permitted to make India an independent country. Because on single man can influence others if his attitude can embody a model.
In closing, I think that art and politics can permit to express fullness of human being. Only if intents are great otherwise it is not the case.
5/ The Foundation Louis-Vuitton pay tribute, until January 14th, one of the heavyweights of contemporary for who black boxers were heroes.
“Painter of the anger”, “boxing painter”… Nicknames are not missing to mention Jean-Michel Basquiat. Today: 30 years after his death, symbol of the contemporary art, the New Yorker painter birthed in Brooklyn, however he sparked controversy at his starts. The artist had to fight to win his place in the white art’s sphere. Son of a Haitian father and a Porto Rican mother, he started his career by creating graffiti.
Until 1976, the pseudonym “SAMO” for “Same Old Shit”, decorated New York streets .In 1983, he met the master of pop art, Andy Warhol. From now on, decorated the Big Apple streets is over, Jean-Michel Basquiat began to show his canvas in New York City and attracted collectors.
Among them, most has accepted to share to the Foundation Louis Vuitton ( in the bois de Boulogne in Paris until January 14th), 120 painting in the exposition dedicated to him. Disposed at four floors , they expose the complexity of one work of almost a decade.
6/ the both expose the problem causes by white supremacists which are planned terrorist and violent attacks on minority people. Indeed, the movie’s aim is to denounce those types of racist behaviours, like the marches of antiracist protesters in Charlottesville. Moreover we can draw a parallel with the slogans used in the film by the organization, neo-Nazis marchers in Charlottesville and the Trump slogan’s campaign: “America first' and 'Make America great again.”
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-12-2018 21:11
Nous corrigeons ce que nous lisons; nous ne donnons pas d'idées sur le fond.
Message de yung97 posté le 02-12-2018 à 16:41:51 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai un devoir,je sollicite votre aide pour corriger les fautes que je pourrais avoir fait,
merci d'avance !
1/ Ron Stallworth is not a black power activist despite the fact that he is very concerned by his community in the American society. The protagonist decided to not get involved of the black organization because he refused their violent and harsh speeches about policeman and the American policy in general. In my opinion, Ron changed a little indeed work as an undercover cop make him aware about the difficult life of black people. Nevertheless, he decided to still be a cop.
2/ Politics has not decided to develop a duty of remembrance so the general opinion is confused and wrong. That make mainstream America to think that the protest of African American are not justify. So when they tried to send a massage, they are conflicting people or traitor of the homeland. There is a process of conformism to create disciplined people.
3/ For me this is excessive but I can understand that point of view actually there is deference of treatment done by police officer. Those cops are killing blacks with no juridical problems (most of the time there are judged not guilty) : this phenomenon make blacks feel like there are second-class citizen such as we are back to the Jim Crow Era. With this extend we can justify this sentence.
4/ Consigne : do you think that film making book making or painting can be efficient political tools? Can you see any connection between individual statements and popular forms of protests?
The borders between art and politics are very narrow. When, you think about it you realised that politics is the art to convince people to think like you want. Then, art has an impact on people’s culture and actually in the way they think. Indeed, we can wonder us if art can be used for politics interests? And if there are links with personal statement and mass protests?
In fact, there is mutual influence between art and politics. Most of the time, the different forms of art are just mirrors of society in fact this is easier to paint what you see. That kind of situation are common, in “Les lettres persanes” Montesquieu just describes the French life thanks to fictive personages. But we can see in his book a discreet way to criticize the monarchy of France. In this way, artistic expression can make people aware of their conditions.
Art and politics are sometimes means to create thoughts and finally protests. Personal statements can impact the world and change mentalities. Ghandi with his statement nonviolence has permitted to make India an independent country. Because on single man can influence others if his attitude can embody a model.
In closing, I think that art and politics can permit to express fullness of human being. Only if intents are great otherwise it is not the case.
5/ The Foundation Louis-Vuitton pay tribute, until January 14th, one of the heavyweights of contemporary for who black boxers were heroes.
“Painter of the anger”, “boxing painter”… Nicknames are not missing to mention Jean-Michel Basquiat. Today: 30 years after his death, symbol of the contemporary art, the New Yorker painter birthed in Brooklyn, however he sparked controversy at his starts. The artist had to fight to win his place in the white art’s sphere. Son of a Haitian father and a Porto Rican mother, he started his career by creating graffiti.
Until 1976, the pseudonym “SAMO” for “Same Old Shit”, decorated New York streets .In 1983, he met the master of pop art, Andy Warhol. From now on, decorated the Big Apple streets is over, Jean-Michel Basquiat began to show his canvas in New York City and attracted collectors.
Among them, most has accepted to share to the Foundation Louis Vuitton ( in the bois de Boulogne in Paris until January 14th), 120 painting in the exposition dedicated to him. Disposed at four floors , they expose the complexity of one work of almost a decade.
6/ the both expose the problem causes by white supremacists which are planned terrorist and violent attacks on minority people. Indeed, the movie’s aim is to denounce those types of racist behaviours, like the marches of antiracist protesters in Charlottesville. Moreover we can draw a parallel with the slogans used in the film by the organization, neo-Nazis marchers in Charlottesville and the Trump slogan’s campaign: “America first' and 'Make America great again.”
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Modifié par lucile83 le 02-12-2018 21:11
Nous corrigeons ce que nous lisons; nous ne donnons pas d'idées sur le fond.
Réponse : Aide/ correction de yung97, postée le 03-12-2018 à 17:28:49 (S | E)
D'accord désolé pour mon erreur. Donc du coup concernant la forme ?
Réponse : Aide/ correction de here4u, postée le 04-12-2018 à 13:54:37 (S | E)
Hello!
Je n'aurai sans doute pas le temps d'aller jusqu'au bout ! (c'est très long !
)1/ Ron Stallworth is not a black power activist despite the fact that he is very concerned by his community in the American society. The protagonist decided to not get involved of the black organization because he refused their violent and harsh speeches about policeman and the American policy
in general. In my opinion, Ron changed a little indeed work as an undercover cop make him aware about (ponctuation et construction à revoir) the difficult life of black people. Nevertheless, he decided to still be (mettre un autre verbe)a cop.2/ Politics= La Politique has not decided to develop a duty of remembrance so the general opinion is confused and wrong. That make mainstream America to think that the protest of African American are not justify. So when they tried to send a massage, they are conflicting people or traitor of the homeland. There is a process of conformism to create disciplined people.
3/ For me this is excessive but I can understand that point of view????? PONCTUATION!??? ou construction??? actually there is deference of treatment done by police officer. Those cops are killing blacks with no juridical problems (most of the time there are judged not guilty) : this phenomenon make blacks feel like there are second-class citizen such as we are back to the Jim Crow Era. With this extend we can justify this sentence.
4/ Consigne : do you think that film making/ book making/ or painting can be efficient political tools? Can you see any connection between individual statements and popular forms of protests?
The borders between art and politics are very narrow. When, you think about it you realised that politics is the art to convince people to think like you want. Then, art has an impact on people’s culture and actually in the way they think. Indeed, we can wonder us if art can be used for politics interests? And if there are links with
personal statement and mass protests?In fact, there is A mutual influence between art and politics. Most of the time, the different forms of art are just XXX mirrors of society
in fact this is easier to paint what you see. That kind of situation are common, in “Les lettres persanes” Montesquieu just describes the French life ..... thanks to fictive personages. But we can see in his book (word order)a discreet way to criticize the monarchy of France. In this way, artistic expression can make people aware of their conditions.Sorry, I can't go on!
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