Notion/Mythes et héros

Notion/Mythes et héros
Message de manontlc posté le 30-12-2018 à 16:28:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
J’ai beaucoup de difficultés en anglais, c’est pour cela que je demande de l’aide, si quelqu’un pouvait jeter un oeuils coup d'oeil à mon texte ( pour l’oral du bac ) et corriger les fautes ce serait top!
Merci pour vos réponses.
C’est seulement le développement de ma première partie.

Heroic people or heroes allow us to dream, to make us happy thanks to the myth which they represent, they inspire us that real or fictitious and we would all like to be like them.
Through the myth of eternal youth in the imaginary history of Peter Pan, the place where everything is possible, weret time stops, where children remain young forever
On the other hand thanks to the effects produced by the literature, for exemple the myth of the journey represented by Robinson Crusoe, at the Time of the big discoveries, who gave the world a new kind of hero: a adventurer
And finally thanks to the cult of youth with Romeo et Juliette who represent the myth of eternal love.
Society identifies with this love story and allow us to dream.


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Modifié par lucile83 le 30-12-2018 21:55

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Réponse : Notion/Mythes et héros de kazwell, postée le 30-12-2018 à 22:18:50 (S | E)
Hello there,

they inspire us that real or fictitious ---> what do you mean by this?
allow us to dream, to make us happy --> c'est comme si tu disais allow us to dream, allow us to make us happy
suggestion : allow us to dream, make us or allow us to dream and feel happy

"history" means "histoire", as in "histoire-géo" que tu vois en cours, pour les contes de fées/livres on utilises "book" or "story" (story va mieux pour ton utilisation)
weret time stops
On the other hand thanks to the effects produced by the literature, for exemple the myth of the journey represented by Robinson Crusoe, at the Time of the big discoveries, who gave the world a new kind of hero: a adventurer --> à reformuler, ça se voit que c'est du google trad, fait quelque chose d'autre pour voir
"cult of youth with Romeo et Juliette" , tu veux dure culte? utilise plutôt "Classic of Romeo and Juliette".

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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-12-2018 11:22
Pas de rouge/rose sur les forums, merci

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Réponse : Notion/Mythes et héros de here4u, postée le 31-12-2018 à 09:49:48 (S | E)
hello!

Heroic people or heroes allow us to dream, to make us happy thanks to the myth which they represent, they inspire us that real or fictitious(= a strange sentence!) and we would all like to be like them.
Through the myth of eternal youth in the imaginary history of Peter Pan, the place where everything is possible, weret time stops, where children remain young forever.
On the other hand thanks to the effects produced by the(your context isn't clear!) literature, for exemple the myth of the journey represented by Robinson Crusoe, at the Time of the big discoveries, who gave the world a new kind of hero: a adventurer
And finally thanks to the cult of youth with Romeo et Juliette who represent the myth of eternal love.
Society identifies with this love story and allow us to dream.

I don't know whether it's a "Google translation" .... but it's really broken English...

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Réponse : Notion/Mythes et héros de manontlc, postée le 02-01-2019 à 12:16:33 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup, ça m’a beaucoup aidé!
Je vais bien retravailler tout cela

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