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Message de haek posté le 07-01-2019 à 21:48:53 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à vous,
j'ai réalisé l'analyse d'une image, je n'ai pas inséré l'image; j'aimerais juste savoir si des fautes ou erreurs sont notables s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance et bonne soirée à vous.
The first document is a sculpture of a woman named “Supermarket Shopper”. It was made by Duane Hanson in 1970. This sculpture was made in Fiberglass and polyester and seems real.
This sculpture represents a quite large woman while she is doing her shopping. She wears blue slippers, blue skirt and pink tee shirt, her tights seem tapered. We can identify different accessories like a cigarette, a collar of flower and a golden collar around her neck, she possesses a black purse. On his head, there is a (bag ?) used to protect her pink curlers. Her eyebrows are really wax and she has an empty and tired gaze. On her body, many bruises and button are visible.
In addition, we can observe with her a shopping cart filled by many products of the currently consummation like toilet paper, bread, dog croquettes, household products, Coca-Cola, fruit juices, coffee, egg, chicken, turkey, ham etc… All these products are packaged; none products seem natural and must represent the abundance of the consumer society, the cigarette amplifies this idea of consummator because it was a product of mass consummation during the 20th century.
We can suppose by the context, that the woman used her car to go in this supermarket and came because of the publicity propaganda lay by the television.
Her attitude is both relaxed and clumsy. Her appearances, dress and accessories give an unsightly image of the woman due to her tapered hose. She may has 40 years old and belong to a modest social class.
Thought this realist sculpture, Duane Hanson want to show how was the American woman during the 20th century, a housewife victim of the consumer society. He wants to discredit the “American way of life”, more generally the American society of 20th century. The consummator looks like a zombie, who buy without thought like everybody who seems to lost her liberty.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-01-2019 22:09
Message de haek posté le 07-01-2019 à 21:48:53 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir à vous,
j'ai réalisé l'analyse d'une image, je n'ai pas inséré l'image; j'aimerais juste savoir si des fautes ou erreurs sont notables s'il vous plait.
Merci d'avance et bonne soirée à vous.
The first document is a sculpture of a woman named “Supermarket Shopper”. It was made by Duane Hanson in 1970. This sculpture was made in Fiberglass and polyester and seems real.
This sculpture represents a quite large woman while she is doing her shopping. She wears blue slippers, blue skirt and pink tee shirt, her tights seem tapered. We can identify different accessories like a cigarette, a collar of flower and a golden collar around her neck, she possesses a black purse. On his head, there is a (bag ?) used to protect her pink curlers. Her eyebrows are really wax and she has an empty and tired gaze. On her body, many bruises and button are visible.
In addition, we can observe with her a shopping cart filled by many products of the currently consummation like toilet paper, bread, dog croquettes, household products, Coca-Cola, fruit juices, coffee, egg, chicken, turkey, ham etc… All these products are packaged; none products seem natural and must represent the abundance of the consumer society, the cigarette amplifies this idea of consummator because it was a product of mass consummation during the 20th century.
We can suppose by the context, that the woman used her car to go in this supermarket and came because of the publicity propaganda lay by the television.
Her attitude is both relaxed and clumsy. Her appearances, dress and accessories give an unsightly image of the woman due to her tapered hose. She may has 40 years old and belong to a modest social class.
Thought this realist sculpture, Duane Hanson want to show how was the American woman during the 20th century, a housewife victim of the consumer society. He wants to discredit the “American way of life”, more generally the American society of 20th century. The consummator looks like a zombie, who buy without thought like everybody who seems to lost her liberty.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 07-01-2019 22:09
Réponse : Analyse d'image/aide de laure95, postée le 08-01-2019 à 10:10:05 (S | E)
Bonjour,
-She wears: mettre au présent en be + -ing.
- (article) blue skirt and (article)pink tee shirt,
- a collar of flower (pluriel)
- she possesses (pas ici, chercher le verbe tenir)a black purse.
- On his (pas le bon possessif: ce n'est oas un homme)head,
- many bruises and button (pluriel) are visible.
- we can observe with her (with her n'esy pas à la bonne place)a shopping cart
- filled by (pas la bonne préposition)many products
- Her appearances: singulier.
- She may has (pas le bon verbe pour l'âge!!! + on ne conjugue pas après may) 40 years old
- Thought: ?
- Duane Hanson want: faute de conjugaison.
- how was the American woman (inverser l'ordre car c'est une interrogative indirecte)during the 20th century,
- the American society of (article)20th century.
- The consummator looks like a zombie, who buy (faute de conjugaison) without thought
like everybody who seems to lost (his or)her liberty. Réponse : Analyse d'image/aide de haek, postée le 08-01-2019 à 18:14:13 (S | E)
Merci de votre réponse je vais corriger mes fautes !
Réponse : Analyse d'image/aide de gerold, postée le 08-01-2019 à 18:52:04 (S | E)
Bonjour,
"consummation" et "consummator" ne s'emploient pas dans ce contexte, cherchez d'autres mots.
"Currently" est un adverbe, il faut un adjectif. "none products seem natural and must represent... "none" est un pronom, il ne peut être suivi d'un nom directement (aucun des produits), et il faut ajouter un mot (pronom personnel) entre "and" et "must", sinon la phrase n'a pas de sens. "... like everybody who seems to lost" : quelqu'un, pas tout le monde, et "lost" est un participe, il faut un auxiliaire (avoir perdu).
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