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Message de scoubidoo71 posté le 14-01-2019 à 15:42:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'apprends l'anglais, Pourriez-vous s'il vous plait me corriger,
Merci !
Our beautiful earth is in danger. We have got a disastrous behaviour towards it you see.
Whenever it's possible we must adopt the simplies gestures in order to protect the environnement.
In the garden, for example, let's not use chemical liquid let's us rather natural manure.
Plants would then grow on the land rich in nutrient and woulb be as a result less prone to illness than they would grow on the poor land.
We sould learn to diversify our diet in other word eat vegetables proteins like quinoa and eat more vegetables and fruits.
Three times or four times per week we should eat neither fish nor meat.
It's a good way to combat the deforestation .
A lot of forest are destroyed and transformed in farmlands and these cereals are reserved for animals.
Moreover the water is not unlimited ressource and unfortunately the cereals require a lot of water.
At home also we should avoid wasting the water. We should take the shower instead of bath and keep the water which we use to wash vegetables in order to water the garden.
The fact that we eat to many fishes impoverishs the ocean and some species havent't got the time to breed themselves.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-01-2019 15:44
Message de scoubidoo71 posté le 14-01-2019 à 15:42:47 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'apprends l'anglais, Pourriez-vous s'il vous plait me corriger,
Merci !
Our beautiful earth is in danger. We have got a disastrous behaviour towards it you see.
Whenever it's possible we must adopt the simplies gestures in order to protect the environnement.
In the garden, for example, let's not use chemical liquid let's us rather natural manure.
Plants would then grow on the land rich in nutrient and woulb be as a result less prone to illness than they would grow on the poor land.
We sould learn to diversify our diet in other word eat vegetables proteins like quinoa and eat more vegetables and fruits.
Three times or four times per week we should eat neither fish nor meat.
It's a good way to combat the deforestation .
A lot of forest are destroyed and transformed in farmlands and these cereals are reserved for animals.
Moreover the water is not unlimited ressource and unfortunately the cereals require a lot of water.
At home also we should avoid wasting the water. We should take the shower instead of bath and keep the water which we use to wash vegetables in order to water the garden.
The fact that we eat to many fishes impoverishs the ocean and some species havent't got the time to breed themselves.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 14-01-2019 15:44
Réponse : Protection/environnement de laure95, postée le 14-01-2019 à 15:59:12 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- the simplies
gestures - let's us (enlever us ) rather (verbe?)natural manure.
- woulb
- in other word (mettre au pluriel)
- A lot of forest (pluriel)are destroyed
- Moreover the (pas de the)water is not (article) unlimited ressource
- we should avoid wasting the (pas de the) water.
- We should take the (a pas the)shower instead of (article)bath
- we eat to (orthographe) many fishes impoverishs (orthographe)the ocean
- and some species havent't got 'don't have pas haven't got)the (pas de the) time to breed themselves
Réponse : Protection/environnement de scoubidoo71, postée le 15-01-2019 à 15:59:43 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup pour cette correction.
Pour simplies gestures, je voulais dire des gestes simples, j'ai regardé dans word référence et ne trouve pas le pluriel de simple.
Réponse : Protection/environnement de nounous, postée le 15-01-2019 à 16:30:32 (S | E)
Bonsoir à vous. En effet, en anglais les adjectifs qualificatifs ne s'accordent pas avec les mots auxquels ils se rapportent.
Donc vous diriez:
simple gestures
= Les gestes simples
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