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Message de hayti posté le 29-04-2019 à 22:09:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous m'indiquer les erreurs s'il vous plait?.
Buildings chemical factory near living areas is a project that some people reject while others like. In one hand, some people are against building chemicals factory in living place and area because the négatif effects that this project can lead to. For instance, microscopic toxic particles in the smoke can bring about some disease, such as lung and throat cancer to people living in those areas. In the other hand, there is some persons who like this kind of project for many reasons. Their most striking argument is that building chemical factory near living areas give many job opportunities to people living there in other words, people can work and find a job near places in where they live and also get money to support their families. To sum up, the project of building a chemical factory in living places have many advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, this kind of project help to reduce poverty and it is advantageous for many people.
Merci infiniment a ceux qui ont la gentillesse de me répondre.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-04-2019 23:30
Message de hayti posté le 29-04-2019 à 22:09:30 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
pourriez-vous m'indiquer les erreurs s'il vous plait?.
Buildings chemical factory near living areas is a project that some people reject while others like. In one hand, some people are against building chemicals factory in living place and area because the négatif effects that this project can lead to. For instance, microscopic toxic particles in the smoke can bring about some disease, such as lung and throat cancer to people living in those areas. In the other hand, there is some persons who like this kind of project for many reasons. Their most striking argument is that building chemical factory near living areas give many job opportunities to people living there in other words, people can work and find a job near places in where they live and also get money to support their families. To sum up, the project of building a chemical factory in living places have many advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, this kind of project help to reduce poverty and it is advantageous for many people.
Merci infiniment a ceux qui ont la gentillesse de me répondre.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-04-2019 23:30
Réponse : Factory/help de gerondif, postée le 30-04-2019 à 10:41:12 (S | E)
Bonjour
erreurs en bleu
Buildings(sans s) chemical factory(pluriel) near living areas is a project that some people reject while others like it.(approve of it) In one hand (on the one hand), some people are against building chemicals(sans s) factory(pluriel) in living places and areas(in living areas suffirait) because of the négatif effects that this project can lead to. For instance, microscopic toxic particles in the smoke can bring about some disease(pluriel), such as lung and throat cancers to people living in those areas. In on the other hand, there is(pluriel) some persons(there are (certain) people who) who like this kind of project for many reasons. Their most striking argument is that building chemical factory(pluriel) near living areas gives many job opportunities to people living there ,in other words, people can work and find a job near places
Merci infiniment a à ceux qui ont auront la gentillesse de me répondre.
Réponse : Factory/help de hayti, postée le 30-04-2019 à 15:05:30 (S | E)
Bonjour,
. C'est très gentil. Merci beaucoup. Cours gratuits > Forum > Forum anglais: Questions sur l'anglais
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