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Message de lise134 posté le 01-05-2019 à 11:23:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
voici ma fiche sur espaces et échanges; pourriez-vous m 'aider à corriger ces textes s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
I'm going to talk about the notion Spaces and exchanges. To begin with, I would like to give a definition of this notion : the notion of spaces and exchanges talking about the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and the interactions between men and different societies. To illustrate What impact does globalisation have on international exchanges?. We will see in a first part the freedom of travels (advantages) and in a second part we will see revolution of transports makes travel easier
I the travels represents freedom and have other advantages
(into the wild )
In english class we have seen some excerpts from the film Into the wild this is a youngs men who lives a life and a family as well off as a future. Between Harvard, a brilliant career, and other “things” he considers artificial, he makes the choice of day-to-day and exploration to live life to the fullest. Its journey can be facilitated by wandering, disconnection, contact with a world free of words and concepts. This film show a freedom because he is completely alone in wild he goes where he wants to go.
we studied a written document about slash It”s an short extract based on the life of of Saul hudson (the guitarist) by the character Slash. We learned that his father tony a young men who went to art shcool he is always drawn to art school and wants to be a painter . He is living a quite of hectic life he doesnt have a stable job . He is divorced and have a kids (slash) he may seen care free and unware of the difficuties of raising child.
slash does not have a stable life his father has a bohemian life. he never lived in the same place for long, he was always on the road moreover his grandparents lived in England and his mother in the United States
II revolution des transports
today it is much easier to travel with transports that go faster and farther and farther.
since The invention of the steam engine and the use of coal led to a transport revolution.Railways and shipping increase the possibilities for the movement of ideas, people and goods. Raw materials and industrial products are transported over long distances. Once isolated areas are opening up to the modern world.
we saw that through a ticket envelope about the inauguratiton about a ray link in 1955 about Canadian Pacific the description says : the world longest scenic dome this ticket envelope shows that transports are faster for exemple this train s. traveled from Montreal and Toronto to Vancouver about 16 hours faster .
it is intended for families because the layout is more comfortable
however there are still many inequalities in the world through the exploitation of resources from poor countries by rich countries like in India where is huge negalities between ruling classes and lowers classes mens and womens . A video underline the fact India is divised between lot of riches , good economy and slums. The journalist said that the good side was called The Indian tiger beaucause it’s a country with great engineering and managerial talent and a highly entrepreneurial spirit among But the other narrative is the face of poverty. The World Bank estimates that about 800 million people, two-thirds of India’s population lives below the two-dollar-a-day poverty line and more than half of them, over 400 million people, survive on less than one dollar a day.
India symbolized poverty with his slums in Delhi The India that’s home to fully one third of the world’s poor and ranks very low on measures of inequality, or very high rather, malnutrition among children and a variety of other ways that we gauge poverty.
finally
travels symbolize freedom and openess
revolution of transports makes travelling easier and faster
globalization allows travel around the world and benefitcs like tourism ,
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Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2019 11:23
Message de lise134 posté le 01-05-2019 à 11:23:19 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
voici ma fiche sur espaces et échanges; pourriez-vous m 'aider à corriger ces textes s'il vous plait ?
Merci pour vos réponses.
I'm going to talk about the notion Spaces and exchanges. To begin with, I would like to give a definition of this notion : the notion of spaces and exchanges talking about the geographical and symbolic areas that all societies occupy and the interactions between men and different societies. To illustrate What impact does globalisation have on international exchanges?. We will see in a first part the freedom of travels (advantages) and in a second part we will see revolution of transports makes travel easier
I the travels represents freedom and have other advantages
(into the wild )
In english class we have seen some excerpts from the film Into the wild this is a youngs men who lives a life and a family as well off as a future. Between Harvard, a brilliant career, and other “things” he considers artificial, he makes the choice of day-to-day and exploration to live life to the fullest. Its journey can be facilitated by wandering, disconnection, contact with a world free of words and concepts. This film show a freedom because he is completely alone in wild he goes where he wants to go.
we studied a written document about slash It”s an short extract based on the life of of Saul hudson (the guitarist) by the character Slash. We learned that his father tony a young men who went to art shcool he is always drawn to art school and wants to be a painter . He is living a quite of hectic life he doesnt have a stable job . He is divorced and have a kids (slash) he may seen care free and unware of the difficuties of raising child.
slash does not have a stable life his father has a bohemian life. he never lived in the same place for long, he was always on the road moreover his grandparents lived in England and his mother in the United States
II revolution des transports
today it is much easier to travel with transports that go faster and farther and farther.
since The invention of the steam engine and the use of coal led to a transport revolution.Railways and shipping increase the possibilities for the movement of ideas, people and goods. Raw materials and industrial products are transported over long distances. Once isolated areas are opening up to the modern world.
we saw that through a ticket envelope about the inauguratiton about a ray link in 1955 about Canadian Pacific the description says : the world longest scenic dome this ticket envelope shows that transports are faster for exemple this train s. traveled from Montreal and Toronto to Vancouver about 16 hours faster .
it is intended for families because the layout is more comfortable
however there are still many inequalities in the world through the exploitation of resources from poor countries by rich countries like in India where is huge negalities between ruling classes and lowers classes mens and womens . A video underline the fact India is divised between lot of riches , good economy and slums. The journalist said that the good side was called The Indian tiger beaucause it’s a country with great engineering and managerial talent and a highly entrepreneurial spirit among But the other narrative is the face of poverty. The World Bank estimates that about 800 million people, two-thirds of India’s population lives below the two-dollar-a-day poverty line and more than half of them, over 400 million people, survive on less than one dollar a day.
India symbolized poverty with his slums in Delhi The India that’s home to fully one third of the world’s poor and ranks very low on measures of inequality, or very high rather, malnutrition among children and a variety of other ways that we gauge poverty.
finally
travels symbolize freedom and openess
revolution of transports makes travelling easier and faster
globalization allows travel around the world and benefitcs like tourism ,
-------------------
Modifié par lucile83 le 01-05-2019 11:23
Réponse : Spaces and exchanges/correction de lucile83, postée le 01-05-2019 à 21:30:58 (S | E)
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