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Message de lise134 posté le 29-03-2020 à 14:05:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
New York is located on the east coast of the United States. The metropolis opens onto the Atlantic Ocean and is 165 kilometers from Philadelphia, halfway between Washington, D.C. and Boston (about 360 kilometers),
MANHATTAN
Manhattan is world famous for its skyscrapers and hectic activity. Manhattan is the economic and financial heart of the city, built around Wall Street which hosts the New York Stock Exchange, as well as Midtown, which has several head offices of companies like Time Warner, Bloomberg LP and MetLife. It is also the cultural center of New York, with its renowned institutions such as the Metropolitan Museum of Art, the American Museum of Natural History and the Museum of Modern Art (MoMA). Most of the most famous skyscrapers are also located in this area, including the Empire State Building, the Chrysler Building, the Comcast Building and the One World Trade Center, symbol of the economic power and renewal of the World Trade Center which was destroyed in the September 11, 2001 attacks.
The borough has 75 neighborhoods and in three zones, from south to north:
Downtown: the historic heart of New York which includes the Financial District, Chinatown and SoHo districts. The languages of origin of the migrants are still spoken there, as for example in the French quarter.
This is where Wall Street and the World Trade Center are located, whose towers were destroyed by the September 11, 2001 attacks.
Midtown: New York's most important business district, which extends from 14th Street to the south of Central Park, the island's green lung.
Uptown: brings together the neighborhoods north of Central Park. They are most often residential, such as Upper East Side, Upper West Side or Harlem.
The first borough of New York is Manhattan. It is an island, and it is the "heart" of the city.
The streets (Streets) cut the city from east to west and are numbered from south to north. The avenues (Avenues) cut Manhattan from south to north and are numbered from east to west. Some streets and avenues have names.
South Manhattan is the heart of New York's economic and administrative activities. This is where the New York Stock Exchange, the first stock exchange in the world, is located. It is located on the very famous Wall Street. But Manhattan also has many dwellings. New York is a cosmopolitan city that was built on immigration. Certain districts are very characteristic, like Chinatown, Little Italy, SoHo, without forgetting the famous Harlem.
The other districts =
The Bronx is the only one of New York's other boroughs to be found on the mainland. It is a poor neighborhood, some streets are infrequent.
The rest are on more or less large islands. Brooklyn and Queens are on Long Island, a very large island that brings together many cities. The last borough is Staten Island, in the south.`
New York has a very rich cultural life and has many museums.
New York attracts many tourists by its monuments and its cultural life.
The Metropolitan Museum of Art is an art museum located in Manhattan, east of Central Park. It conserves more than two million works, from Antiquity to the XXth century. The Egyptian temple of Dendur is exposed in a large room. New Yorkers call it the MET.
The Museum of Modern Art is a museum of modern art. It is nicknamed the MoMa.
The Solomon R. Guggenheim Museum on Fifth Avenue.
Besides the "big" museums, there are many other museums in New York.
There are more than 4 million visitors to New York each year.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-03-2020 14:37
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Message de lise134 posté le 29-03-2020 à 14:05:15 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger s'il vous plait?
Merci pour vos réponses.
New York is located on the east coast of the United States. The metropolis opens onto the Atlantic Ocean and is 165 kilometers from Philadelphia, halfway between Washington, D.C. and Boston (about 360 kilometers),
MANHATTAN
Manhattan is world famous for its skyscrapers and hectic activity. Manhattan is the economic and financial heart of the city, built around Wall Street which hosts the New York Stock Exchange, as well as Midtown, which has several head offices of companies like Time Warner, Bloomberg LP and MetLife. It is also the cultural center of New York, with its renowned institutions such as the Metropolitan Museum of Art, the American Museum of Natural History and the Museum of Modern Art (MoMA). Most of the most famous skyscrapers are also located in this area, including the Empire State Building, the Chrysler Building, the Comcast Building and the One World Trade Center, symbol of the economic power and renewal of the World Trade Center which was destroyed in the September 11, 2001 attacks.
The borough has 75 neighborhoods and in three zones, from south to north:
Downtown: the historic heart of New York which includes the Financial District, Chinatown and SoHo districts. The languages of origin of the migrants are still spoken there, as for example in the French quarter.
This is where Wall Street and the World Trade Center are located, whose towers were destroyed by the September 11, 2001 attacks.
Midtown: New York's most important business district, which extends from 14th Street to the south of Central Park, the island's green lung.
Uptown: brings together the neighborhoods north of Central Park. They are most often residential, such as Upper East Side, Upper West Side or Harlem.
The first borough of New York is Manhattan. It is an island, and it is the "heart" of the city.
The streets (Streets) cut the city from east to west and are numbered from south to north. The avenues (Avenues) cut Manhattan from south to north and are numbered from east to west. Some streets and avenues have names.
South Manhattan is the heart of New York's economic and administrative activities. This is where the New York Stock Exchange, the first stock exchange in the world, is located. It is located on the very famous Wall Street. But Manhattan also has many dwellings. New York is a cosmopolitan city that was built on immigration. Certain districts are very characteristic, like Chinatown, Little Italy, SoHo, without forgetting the famous Harlem.
The other districts =
The Bronx is the only one of New York's other boroughs to be found on the mainland. It is a poor neighborhood, some streets are infrequent.
The rest are on more or less large islands. Brooklyn and Queens are on Long Island, a very large island that brings together many cities. The last borough is Staten Island, in the south.`
New York has a very rich cultural life and has many museums.
New York attracts many tourists by its monuments and its cultural life.
The Metropolitan Museum of Art is an art museum located in Manhattan, east of Central Park. It conserves more than two million works, from Antiquity to the XXth century. The Egyptian temple of Dendur is exposed in a large room. New Yorkers call it the MET.
The Museum of Modern Art is a museum of modern art. It is nicknamed the MoMa.
The Solomon R. Guggenheim Museum on Fifth Avenue.
Besides the "big" museums, there are many other museums in New York.
There are more than 4 million visitors to New York each year.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 29-03-2020 14:37
Formules de politesse ajoutées
Réponse : Aide/ exposé NYC de gerondif, postée le 29-03-2020 à 15:07:01 (S | E)
Bonjour
majuscules à North, South, East, West, le reste ressemble à un article wikipedia et est en anglais correct.
Réponse : Aide/ exposé NYC de here4u, postée le 29-03-2020 à 15:11:30 (S | E)
Hello!
Je vais commencer ... Pas certaine de pouvoir aller jusqu'au bout in one go ...
New York is located on the east coast * of the United States. The metropolis opens onto the Atlantic Ocean and is 165 kilometers from Philadelphia, halfway between Washington, D.C. and Boston (about 360 kilometers),
MANHATTAN
Manhattan is world famous for its skyscrapers and hectic activity. Manhattan is the economic and financial heart of the city, built around Wall Street which hosts the New York Stock Exchange, as well as Midtown, which has several head offices of companies like Time Warner, Bloomberg LP and MetLife. It is also the cultural center of New York(City?), with its renowned institutions such as the Metropolitan Museum of Art, the American Museum of Natural History and the Museum of Modern Art (MoMA). Most of the most famous skyscrapers are also located in this area, including the Empire State Building, the Chrysler Building, the Comcast Building and the One World Trade Center, symbol of the economic power and renewal of the World Trade Center which was destroyed in the September 11, 2001 attacks.(Tout ceci fait vraiment catalogue touristique ...
)The borough has 75 neighborhoods and in three zones, from south to north:
Downtown: the historic heart of New York which includes the Financial District, Chinatown and SoHo districts. The languages of origin of the migrants are still spoken there, as for example in the French quarter.
This is where Wall Street and the World Trade Center are located, whose (l'antécédent devrait être un nom!) towers were destroyed by the September 11, 2001 attacks.
Midtown: New York's most important business district, which extends from 14th Street to the south of Central Park, the island's green lung.
Uptown: brings together the neighborhoods north of Central Park. They are most often residential, such as XXX Upper East Side, XXX Upper West Side or Harlem.
* Lien internet
Réponse : Aide/ exposé NYC de here4u, postée le 29-03-2020 à 15:17:12 (S | E)
HELLO ! gerondif !
Amusant que nous l'on ait ressenti la même chose, non ?
Il faudrait avant tout savoir ce qu'est cette présentation ... Si c'est pour le Bac, on ne vous demande pas du tout de nous faire un catalogue touristique. Il vaudrait mieux choisir un terme générique (ex: "de nombreux musées"...) et vous concentrer ensuite sur une anecdote précise (ou une description commentée! ) se rapportant à l'un d'entre eux, qui fasse sentir une réflexion personnelle ...
Donner avant tout le "contexte" du devoir ... merci !
Réponse : Aide/ exposé NYC de lucile83, postée le 29-03-2020 à 16:18:32 (S | E)
Hello,
Moi aussi j'ai pensé à un guide touristique, mais pas vraiment copié-collé sinon j'aurais supprimé le post.
Je pense aussi que refaire un texte personnel serait mieux pour lise134!
Réponse : Aide/ exposé NYC de lise134, postée le 29-03-2020 à 18:43:18 (S | E)
Merci de vos réponses en effet c'est un travail à rendre mais pas pour le Bac.
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