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Message de manon123 posté le 28-09-2021 à 19:15:03 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à toutes et à tous
je suis en classe de 3° et j'aimerais savoir si tout était "anglais" dans mon dialogue. Nous sommes 4 personnes.
Merci d'avance!

- What not do a field trip into the wild ?
- Yes, but where ?
- Maybe to Alberta
We could do rock-climbing, caving, canoeing and kayaking.
- That's could be fun but extreme sports are too dangerous.
- I agree because I think the equipment is expensive.
- It's expensive but we can see beautiful landscapes and it's physical activities : healthy, unity, help, team spirit...
- We do a lot of sports, we should think at other disciplines like Frech, Technology...
- I desagree because we can have a direct contact with wild.
- Don't forget that is a lack of comfort in the wild. For example, the weather condition not always perfect, it's rain a lot, it's snow a lot, it's not comfortable and
there is too much promiscuity.
- I agree with youbut there is a greater relationship with the teachers and the pupils.
- Aboslutely ! But wait, we will miss our loved ones very much !

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-09-2021 21:44
gris, pas de rouge sur le forum

Réponse : Dialogue/aide de ukahs, postée le 28-09-2021 à 22:32:50 (S | E)
Hello,
J'ai essayé de garder tes tournures de phrases en les dénaturant le moins possible, juste ce qu'il faut pour qu'elles sonnent un peu mieux.

- Why not do a field trip into the wild ?
- Yes, but where ?
- What about Alberta ?
We could go rock-climbing, caving, canoeing and kayaking.
- That could be fun but extreme sports activities are too dangerous.
- I agree because I think the equipment is expensive.
- It's expensive but we could see beautiful landscapes and these are physical activities : healthy, unity, help, team spirit...
- We do a lot of sports, we should think about other disciplines like French, Technology...
- I desagree because we can have a direct contact with nature.
- Don't forget the lack of comfort in the wild. For example, weather conditions are not always perfect, it rains and snows a lot, it's not comfortable and there is too much promiscuity.
- I agree with you but there is a greater relationship between teachers and pupils.
- Absolutely ! But wait, we will miss our loved ones so much !

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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-09-2021 23:02
gris

Réponse : Dialogue/aide de laure95, postée le 29-09-2021 à 10:16:12 (S | E)
Bonjour,
I dIsagree

Réponse : Dialogue/aide de gerold, postée le 29-09-2021 à 12:38:36 (S | E)
Bonjour

That could be fun but extreme sports activities are too dangerous.
- I agree because I think the equipment is expensive.

Les activités sont dangereuses parce que l'équipement coûte cher ? Pas très logique comme dialogue.

Réponse : Dialogue/aide de manon123, postée le 29-09-2021 à 16:45:16 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup !

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