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Message de ladycla49 posté le 05-06-2022 à 11:10:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je suis en train de préparer un oral d'anglais que je dois faire la semaine prochaine, et je rencontre quelques difficultés sur certaines structures.
Pourriez-vous me les corriger? Je sens que ce n'est pas bon, mais je ne vois pas comment le modifier seule:
" My last position was front office manager. It was a very demanding position with heavy workloads. I used to love my job, but with time, I did not feel good any more at work. I wasn't curious anymore about it. I could feel I long for something else but I was not able to know what. Then Covid arrived, and the lockdown gave me the opportunity to have a lot of time off at home. It made me realized I wanted to start a new challenge in my professionnal life. Accounting became an obvious option as I felt that the field of accounting was a perfect match for my skills and preferences. Then I was lucky enough because I was made redundant, and the company I worked in had to pay for my full training. So it was the perfect opportunity and situation for me to start something new".
So what do you think?
Thanks in advance for your help,
Have a lovely sunday
Message de ladycla49 posté le 05-06-2022 à 11:10:36 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
Je suis en train de préparer un oral d'anglais que je dois faire la semaine prochaine, et je rencontre quelques difficultés sur certaines structures.
Pourriez-vous me les corriger? Je sens que ce n'est pas bon, mais je ne vois pas comment le modifier seule:
" My last position was front office manager. It was a very demanding position with heavy workloads. I used to love my job, but with time, I did not feel good any more at work. I wasn't curious anymore about it. I could feel I long for something else but I was not able to know what. Then Covid arrived, and the lockdown gave me the opportunity to have a lot of time off at home. It made me realized I wanted to start a new challenge in my professionnal life. Accounting became an obvious option as I felt that the field of accounting was a perfect match for my skills and preferences. Then I was lucky enough because I was made redundant, and the company I worked in had to pay for my full training. So it was the perfect opportunity and situation for me to start something new".
So what do you think?
Thanks in advance for your help,
Have a lovely sunday
Réponse : Correction/ texte anglais de gerondif, postée le 05-06-2022 à 11:32:38 (S | E)
Bonjour
Assez peu d'erreurs en fait.
" My last position was front office manager. It was a very demanding position with a heavy workload. I used to love my job, but with time, I stopped feeling good at work. I wasn't curious about it any more. I could feel I was longing for something else but I didn't know what. Then Covid arrived, and the lockdown gave me the opportunity to have a lot of time off at home. It made me realize I wanted to start a new challenge in my professionnal life. Accounting became an obvious option as I felt that the field of accounting was a perfect match for my skills and preferences. Then I was rather lucky because I was made redundant, and the company I worked in/for had to pay for my full training. So it was the perfect opportunity and situation for me to start something new".
Réponse : Correction/ texte anglais de ladycla49, postée le 05-06-2022 à 14:39:55 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup, c'est parfait comme ça
Bon après-midi
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