Playing with words/38

Playing with words/38
Message de here4u posté le 08-12-2022 à 17:15:23 (S | E | F)
Hello dear Friends!

Voici votre nouveau challenge ! "Playing and working with words"... La date limite pour cet exercice est fin décembre 2022.

Je vous rappelle que cet exercice a des règles qui doivent être respectées. Lisez-les bien si vous ne les connaissez pas ! Ce travail est loin d'être un jeu ... mais il peut être très ludique ... Il vous laisse également toute liberté de choisir votre thème !

Using THE 8 WORDS given below (the 2 verbs can be put in whatever tenses or forms you fancy but MUST remain verbs!), 2 adjectives or adverbs, 2 nouns and 2 link words, + a given structure and the suitable punctuation, search your minds, think hard and create AN ONLY meaningful SENTENCE. "Easy", isn't it? (In fact, it's more easily said than done! )

- You CANNOT change the nature of the words!
- You CANNOT use two or more compulsory words consecutively!

PLEASE, WHEN YOU WRITE YOUR SENTENCE, PUT CAPITALS TO THE GIVEN WORDS! [and specify the number of words at the end.]

Je vous rappelle qu'« une phrase », une seule, se termine par un point [final, d'exclamation ou d'interrogation], peut avoir de la ponctuation interne ",/; /:/ [...], et qu'elle doit avant tout avoir un sens. (Il ne doit y avoir qu'UN SEUL POINT dans votre phrase - à la fin.) Le but ultime est de faire une seule phrase complexe, mais courte ... Je le répète : elle doit avoir un sens et sa logique interne !
Cet exercice est TRES difficile, c'est pourquoi il demande beaucoup de réflexion et d'attention, de rigueur aussi dans l'application des règles. Vous ne devez le poster QU'UNE FOIS (ne faire qu'un seul exemplaire).
Pour que chacun ait la possibilité de travailler avec nous, cet exercice a des niveaux différents. Vous pouvez choisir celui qui vous convient :

Le niveau fera une seule phrase en moins de 80 mots.
Le niveau une seule phrase et toujours 60 mots, au plus.
Le niveau **, pour les plus habiles, fera une phrase de moins de 40 mots ...
I feel it's a tricky one, this time! [... as ever!] I'm sure you'll overcome this!

Here are the words:
- To BLAME– To ATTACK – a SIGH - a GESTURE – LUCKY – STRANGE – PROVIDED – WHOSE + utiliser UN CONDITIONNEL PASSE.

Lien internet
(2è paragraphe)

C'est parti pour une " très jolie phrase correcte et courte ! "
Go for it with THE FORCE!

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Réponse : Playing with words/38 de maxwell, postée le 08-12-2022 à 22:11:45 (S | E)
Hello Here4U!
Here's my try

With a SIGH, Jolly Jumper was ruminating: "PROVIDED you don't ATTACK a STRANGE cowboy WHOSE ambiguous GESTURES displease you, your rider pampers you; LUCKY Luke SHOULDN'T HAVE BLAMED me!" (31W)

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Réponse : Playing with words/38 de amalia80, postée le 09-12-2022 à 16:21:29 (S | E)
Hello Here4u; for the correction

PROVIDED that you hadn't ATTACKED that STRANGE boy WHOSE only fault was to make a rude GESTURE when you told him you had been LUCKY at gambling;I WOULDN'T HAVE BLAMED YOU or even breathed a SIGH! 37 WORDS

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Réponse : Playing with words/38 de littlerene24, postée le 15-12-2022 à 14:49:48 (S | E)
Hello everybody! Here is my attempt. ("Without risk there, is no reward." )

I WOULDN'T HAVE BLAMED and ATTACKED you in return PROVIDED your STRANGE SIGH could have been considered as a LUCKY GESTURE WHOSE meaning needed nevertheless to be determined. (28 words)

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Réponse : Playing with words/38 de here4u, postée le 20-12-2022 à 08:44:04 (S | E)
Hello!

You still have a lot of time to Rack Your Brains! Play with these words, and make wonders...

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Réponse : Playing with words/38 de here4u, postée le 28-12-2022 à 12:16:22 (S | E)
Hello dears!

No pain, no gain! You're right! STILL A FEW DAYS to post your tries...

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Réponse : Playing with words/38 de mad14, postée le 30-12-2022 à 11:39:08 (S | E)
Hello Here4u and all the workers. HAPPY NEW YEAR!
My work is long but it is...

Attracted by unusual bleats and barks, the farmer attended a STRANGE scene: three stray dogs were ATTACKING his flock of sheep; he made desperate GESTURES...powerless, he heaved a SIGH, he isn't LUCKY... PROVIDED that the dogs'owner arrive, owner WHOSE the farmer wouldn't have BLAMED if he had accurately closed the kennel. (55 mots sans compter les espaces et la ponctuation).

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Réponse : Playing with words/38 de here4u, postée le 31-12-2022 à 16:07:50 (S | E)
Hello dears!

for your efforts! Please, do respect the rules...


- With a SIGH, Jolly Jumper was ruminating: "PROVIDED you don't ATTACK a STRANGE cowboy WHOSE ambiguous GESTURES displease you, your rider pampers you; LUCKY Luke SHOULDN'T HAVE BLAMED me!" (31W) TTB

- PROVIDED you hadn't ATTACKED that STRANGE boy WHOSE only fault was to make a rude GESTURE when you told him you had been LUCKY at gambling, I WOULDN'T HAVE BLAMED YOU or even breathed/ (heaved) a SIGH! 37 WORDS TTB


- I WOULDN'T HAVE BLAMED and/or ATTACKED you in return PROVIDED your STRANGE (smile and) SIGH could have been considered as LUCKY but rude GESTURES and attitudes WHOSE meaning needed, to be determined. (33 words)[J’ai rajouté 5 mots … pour obéir aux règles énoncées …] [Deux (ou plus de) mots imposés ne peuvent pas se suivre ... ]J'espère ne pas avoir trahi l'auteur ...


- Attracted by unusual bleats and barks, the farmer attended a STRANGE scene: three stray dogs were ATTACKING his flock of sheep; he made desperate GESTURES, and powerless, he heaved a SIGH;TTB he would be LUCKY... PROVIDED the dogs'owner arrived, an owner WHOSE farmer/ (employee) would be BLAMED for not locking the kennel. (55 mots).


Bravo à vous ! Je vous rappelle, ceci est un exercice TRES DIFFICILE ... et vous méritez d'être félicité d'avoir participé, et encore plus d'avoir réussi !

My best wishes for a

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