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Message de here4u posté le 27-09-2024 à 12:16:23 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,
Here is (again! ) an easy exercise that everyone can do.
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles (surtout qu’ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement.
) Cependant, je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas...
Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible.
De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pouvez répondre.
1. What is your best way to relax?
2. Are you good at telling jokes? You can tell us one is you want!
3. What is the best memory of your childhood?
4. What sort of restaurants do you prefer?
Vous pouvez choisir 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 15 0 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… et je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons !
Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation...
Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !) le vendredi 11 octobre 2024 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE. 
Message de here4u posté le 27-09-2024 à 12:16:23 (S | E | F)
Hello dears,
Here is (again! ) an easy exercise that everyone can do.
Je sais que l'Expression libre est la compétence la plus difficile à bien acquérir dans l'apprentissage d'une langue, même si elle est notre langue maternelle, d'ailleurs...
Certains m’avaient dit être gênés d’exprimer des idées personnelles (surtout qu’ils avaient l’impression – souvent fausse – de les exprimer maladroitement.
) Cependant, je ne vous demande pas de " raconter votre vie " si vous ne le désirez pas...
Je souhaite juste vous voir vous exprimer sur tout sujet aussi " librement " que possible. De plus, je pense que vous aurez maintenant compris que pour moi, toute expression, même maladroite, est intéressante et a de la valeur. Elle nous stimule tous à " trouver mieux " !
Voici les questions auxquelles vous pouvez répondre.
1. What is your best way to relax?
2. Are you good at telling jokes? You can tell us one is you want!
3. What is the best memory of your childhood?
4. What sort of restaurants do you prefer?
Vous pouvez choisir 1 ou 2 questions au choix – en notant bien les références - et développer celle(s) que vous voulez, jusqu’à atteindre en tout un maximum d’environ 15 0 mots.
Envoyez-moi vos réponses en mp et je publierai une première série que vous 'corrigerez' (en bleu d’abord pendant deux jours) puis en vert… et je publierai ensuite la deuxième série... (sans changements donc ! ) Vous gagnez de la liberté (celle de ne pas parler de plusieurs sujets, ceux qui ne vous " inspirent pas "... Vous écrivez la longueur que vous voulez, vous pouvez choisir d'inventer, de plaisanter, ou de répondre avec sérieux... Nous vous suivrons ! Cet exercice sera pour vous un
ou en fonction de la qualité de vos écrits et des difficultés (surmontées) dans la prestation... Cet exercice sera corrigé (j'espère !) le vendredi 11 octobre 2024 ! Go for it! with THE FORCE.
Réponse : Let's suggest 71/Taking a break 17 de here4u, postée le 28-09-2024 à 11:06:05 (S | E)
Hello dears,
You're so fast!
Here is our ANSWER A:Topic 4: Please, indicate possible mistake and underline what looks clumsy to you.
When I go to a restaurant, it's to celebrate a special event.The meal in a restaurant must be an exceptional moment.
I don't see the point of going to a restaurant to eat a steak and fries or a pasta dish.
I prefer to pay for a diner in a starred restaurant. which each time leaves me with an unforgettable memory.
Even if you don't have a lot of money, it is definitely worth saving up even forth months, to experience such refinement. You would be stunned by the decoration of the room, and tables, the presentation of the dishes on the plates, the flavors, and impeccable service. Everything is luxury, beautiful and meals are fabulously tasty. It's just fun.
Thanks for your help!
Réponse : Let's suggest 71/Taking a break 17 de happynutmeg13, postée le 28-09-2024 à 17:13:07 (S | E)
Hello!
I cannot see a lot to change...
When I go to a restaurant, it's to celebrate a special event.The meal in a restaurant must be an exceptional moment.
I don't see the point of going to a restaurant to eat a steak and fries or a pasta dish.
I prefer to pay for a diner in a starred restaurant. which each time leaves me with an unforgettable memory.
Even if you don't have a lot of money, it is definitely worth saving up even fforth months, to experience such refinement. You would be stunned (tense?) by the decoration of the room, and tables, the presentation of the dishes on the plates, the flavors, and xx impeccable service. Everything is luxury, beautifulx and meals are fabulously tasty. It's just fun.
Réponse : Let's suggest 71/Taking a break 17 de magie8, postée le 02-10-2024 à 02:43:10 (S | E)
Hello! CORRECTION EN VERT MERCI Happynumeg
I cannot see a lot to change...
When I go to a restaurant, it's to celebrate a special event.The meal in a restaurant must be an exceptional moment.
I don't see the point of going to a restaurant to eat a steak and fries or a pasta dish.
I prefer to pay for a diner in a starred restaurant. which each time leaves me with an unforgettable memory.
Even if you don't have a lot of money, it is definitely worth saving up even (for months, to experience such refinement. (You will be stunned by the decoration of the room, and tables, the presentation of the dishes on the plates, the flavors, and (an impeccable service. Everything is luxury, ( beautifully and meals are fabulously tasty. It's just fun.
Réponse : Let's suggest 71/Taking a break 17 de gerold, postée le 02-10-2024 à 07:34:31 (S | E)
Hello!
In addition to Magie's remarks :
When I go to a restaurant, it's to celebrate a special event. A (it's not a particular meal) meal in a restaurant must be an exceptional moment.
I don't see the point of going to a restaurant to eat a steak and fries or a pasta dish.
I prefer to pay for a diner in a starred restaurant,, (comma instead of full stop) which each time leaves me with an unforgettable memory.
Even if you don't have a lot of money, it is definitely worth saving up even (for months, to experience such refinement. (You will be stunned by the decoration of the room, and tables, the presentation of the dishes on the plates, the flavors, and (an* impeccable service. Everything is (luxurious and beautiful, and meals are fabulously tasty**. It's just fun.
* Not sure about this "an" : "Today's customers demand impeccable service and ..." (found on Internet)
** Or luxurious, beautiful and fabulously tasty (to avoid 2 "and").
Réponse : Let's suggest 71/Taking a break 17 de here4u, postée le 02-10-2024 à 23:19:30 (S | E)
Hello dears!
I'm back! Terribly aching and hobbling...
Let's hope the drugs in my system will not have too many side effects on me...
Now, we're expecting Let's suggest Answer B
Réponse : Let's suggest 71/Taking a break 17 de here4u, postée le 03-10-2024 à 22:35:11 (S | E)
Hello dears writers and correctors!
Here is our ANSWER B: please indicate possible mistakes and underline what is clumsy in the text.
Topic 3. What is the best memory of your childhood?
A lot of my good childhood's memories are connected to my grandmother; one of them is the time I spent with her, in the very village where she used to come on holidays as a child, among her grand-parents, cousins, aunts and uncles. I especially remember one afternoon, when she took me to some place where she knew we could pick raspberries; while eating the amazingly tasty little fruits, she explained this family from the past to me: Uncle Joseph with his forge, Aunt Marie, who was so talented for embroidery, and so many more I've now forgotten. All of them came alive to my eyes, so vivid and enthusiastic was her talk.
For no reason, I was fond of those people, and I could feel that a part of them was still living in my grandmother, and in me too, through the stories she shared about them." 150 words
Thanks for your help!
Réponse : Let's suggest 71/Taking a break 17 de here4u, postée le 05-10-2024 à 16:05:53 (S | E)
Hello!
No indication!?
It's true that the ANSWER is pretty good! Not much to correct...Topic 3. What is the best memory of your childhood?
A lot of my good childhood's memories are connected to my grandmother; one of them is the time I spent with her, in the very village where she used to come on holidays as a child, among her grand-parents, cousins, aunts and uncles. I especially remember one afternoon, when she took me to some place where she knew we could pick raspberries; while eating the amazingly tasty little fruits, she explained this family from the past to me: Uncle Joseph with his forge, Aunt Marie, who was so talented for embroidery, and so many more I've now forgotten. All of them came alive to my eyes, so vivid and enthusiastic was her talk.
For no reason, I was fond of those people, and I could feel that a part of them was still living in my grandmother,(ambiguous) and in me too, through the stories she shared about them." 150 words
Thanks for your help!
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