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Message de nala91 posté le 29-10-2007 à 16:52:11 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
J'ai rédigé une petite lettre et j'aimerais bien de l'aide pour corriger les fautes (emploi des tps, tournure de phrases, vocabulaires)...
Dear May,
It's very kind of you to make me this proposition. I would be verry happy to stay in your flat during my week in Edinburg, and to make you service. So I accept with pleasure your offer. You can be quiet, I will take charge of everything.
I'll arrived the 19th November, near 15:00 pm. If you leave the key with your neighbours, please tell me teirs names and their flat number for I can pick up.
More over, I have some pratical questions to ask you:
Firs, I don't know exactly how to go to you flat, will I have to take bus, or could I go on foot? Can you explain? And have you any instructions for cat's diet or for the plants?
Thinks to give me a number for join you in case of problem or to convey urgent messages to you. Finally, if you have any places recommended to visit, tell me them, you know well the town, so you will give me good advice.
Thank you very much, again, I wait for your answer, and for all the last instructions. ...
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Modifié par micka le 29-10-2007 21:01
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Message de nala91 posté le 29-10-2007 à 16:52:11 (S | E | F | I)
Bonjour,
J'ai rédigé une petite lettre et j'aimerais bien de l'aide pour corriger les fautes (emploi des tps, tournure de phrases, vocabulaires)...
Dear May,
It's very kind of you to make me this proposition. I would be verry happy to stay in your flat during my week in Edinburg, and to make you service. So I accept with pleasure your offer. You can be quiet, I will take charge of everything.
I'll arrived the 19th November, near 15:00 pm. If you leave the key with your neighbours, please tell me teirs names and their flat number for I can pick up.
More over, I have some pratical questions to ask you:
Firs, I don't know exactly how to go to you flat, will I have to take bus, or could I go on foot? Can you explain? And have you any instructions for cat's diet or for the plants?
Thinks to give me a number for join you in case of problem or to convey urgent messages to you. Finally, if you have any places recommended to visit, tell me them, you know well the town, so you will give me good advice.
Thank you very much, again, I wait for your answer, and for all the last instructions. ...
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Modifié par micka le 29-10-2007 21:01
Ajout formule politesse
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