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correction d'anglais
Message de chaachaa posté le 12-05-2008 à 18:18:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger se sujet d'anglais svp.
Voici mon sujet:Describe someone you know who has a musical/artistic/sporting/intellectual talent. What do they do and what qualities do they have.
For this subject I chose to speak about my grand-mother because she paint incredibly well. When she was small she took lessons of drawing and painting.
It's very impressive because she is talented in the watercolor, with the gouache and a various of other painting. I consider my grand mother as an artist. Every month she exposes her works in exhibition of painting and often she sells her paintings.
My grand mother Possess the qualities to be a painter, she is Creative and imaginative, it's for this qualities than she succeeds in her passion and her profession.
For examples in 2004 she finished the first one in a concour of painting. when I am young she painted a painting of me and my brother and the resemblance between the painting and the reality was impressive.
Merci de votre aide.
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Modifié par bridg le 12-05-2008 19:11
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre d'indiquer les corrections à faire , mais de laisser le membre demandeur s'auto corriger. Merci.
Message de chaachaa posté le 12-05-2008 à 18:18:31 (S | E | F)
Bonjour, pouvez vous me corriger se sujet d'anglais svp.
Voici mon sujet:Describe someone you know who has a musical/artistic/sporting/intellectual talent. What do they do and what qualities do they have.
For this subject I chose to speak about my grand-mother because she paint incredibly well. When she was small she took lessons of drawing and painting.
It's very impressive because she is talented in the watercolor, with the gouache and a various of other painting. I consider my grand mother as an artist. Every month she exposes her works in exhibition of painting and often she sells her paintings.
My grand mother Possess the qualities to be a painter, she is Creative and imaginative, it's for this qualities than she succeeds in her passion and her profession.
For examples in 2004 she finished the first one in a concour of painting. when I am young she painted a painting of me and my brother and the resemblance between the painting and the reality was impressive.
Merci de votre aide.
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Modifié par bridg le 12-05-2008 19:11
Il est demandé aux membres qui auront la gentillesse de répondre d'indiquer les corrections à faire , mais de laisser le membre demandeur s'auto corriger. Merci.
Réponse: correction d'anglais de hughy, postée le 12-05-2008 à 21:48:21 (S | E)
Bonjour,
1-when she was small = adjectif incorrect
2 - when I am young = temps incorrect
Bon courage
Réponse: correction d'anglais de chaachaa, postée le 12-05-2008 à 21:51:05 (S | E)
merci de ton aide
est que c'est sa?
when she was little
when I as young
Réponse: correction d'anglais de chaachaa, postée le 12-05-2008 à 21:53:38 (S | E)
désolé je me suis trompé
when I was young
Réponse: correction d'anglais de marlond, postée le 12-05-2008 à 22:23:42 (S | E)
"When she was small" is fine. There's nothing wrong with that. I might be more likely to say "When she was young", but there's no difference between "small" and "little" here really.
"When I was young" is also correct.
marlond
Réponse: correction d'anglais de diadia10, postée le 13-05-2008 à 01:26:47 (S | E)
Bonjour,
because she paint = temps incorrect
My grand mother Possess = temps incorrect
it's for this qualities than she succeeds = "this" incorrect ; "than" incorrect
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