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Message de super-eva posté le 23-12-2008 à 23:54:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
Voici la description que j'ai faite(s) mais je ne suis pas sûre que ce soit très cohérent et je trouve ça un peu court, pouvez- vous me dire donner votre avis ? Merci d'avance !!
These cartoons are in black and white and drawing by Martin Eayrs, it dates from 2001. Their focus on new technology, computers.
The first cartoon show two men in a shop and the second cartoon there a man in her office.
In first cartoon, the protagonists are two men, a customer at left and a seller at right. They are dressed with a costume and a tie. They are in a electrical shop.
The seller enumerate all the models of computer, while the customer look at these ones .He look amazed, surprised and land questions.
I think that the seller want the seller want at any price sell a computer, but the customer want look at and choose unhurriedly, sight him reaction.
In the second cartoon, the protagonist is a man, who is dressed with a tee-shirt, a trouser and put on with slippers. I think so it's the customer of the first cartoon.
He sits in him office. Behind him, there are the computers. He holds in him hand a candle by to use, because there was a power outage, owing to computers. In him other hand there is a telecommand. He want look disappointed.
The two cartoons are focusing the computers and his disadvantages.
The first cartoon characterizes the strength of sale the seller.
The second cartoon characterizes the compulsive buy of the customers, and their regrets, or characterizes the persons who are not familiar with computers and the new technology.
These cartoons are funny because they are caricatures and situations are exaggerated.
The message is transmit so was funny and exaggerated for that the message gets trough better.
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Modifié par bridg le 24-12-2008 06:42
Message de super-eva posté le 23-12-2008 à 23:54:58 (S | E | F)
Bonjour ,
Voici la description que j'ai faite
These cartoons are in black and white and drawing by Martin Eayrs, it dates from 2001. Their focus on new technology, computers.
The first cartoon show two men in a shop and the second cartoon there a man in her office.
In first cartoon, the protagonists are two men, a customer at left and a seller at right. They are dressed with a costume and a tie. They are in a electrical shop.
The seller enumerate all the models of computer, while the customer look at these ones .He look amazed, surprised and land questions.
I think that the seller want the seller want at any price sell a computer, but the customer want look at and choose unhurriedly, sight him reaction.
In the second cartoon, the protagonist is a man, who is dressed with a tee-shirt, a trouser and put on with slippers. I think so it's the customer of the first cartoon.
He sits in him office. Behind him, there are the computers. He holds in him hand a candle by to use, because there was a power outage, owing to computers. In him other hand there is a telecommand. He want look disappointed.
The two cartoons are focusing the computers and his disadvantages.
The first cartoon characterizes the strength of sale the seller.
The second cartoon characterizes the compulsive buy of the customers, and their regrets, or characterizes the persons who are not familiar with computers and the new technology.
These cartoons are funny because they are caricatures and situations are exaggerated.
The message is transmit so was funny and exaggerated for that the message gets trough better.
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Modifié par bridg le 24-12-2008 06:42
Réponse: Description /new technology de linsey34, postée le 24-12-2008 à 09:18:33 (S | E)
Dear super-eva,
These cartoons are in black and white and drawing by Martin Eayrs, it dates from 2001. Their focus on new technology, computers.
The first cartoon show two men in a shop and the second cartoon there a man in her office.
In first cartoon, the protagonists are two men, a customer at left and a seller at right. They are dressed with a costume and a tie. They are in a electrical shop.
The seller enumerate all the models of computer, while the customer look at these ones .He look amazed, surprised and land questions.
I think that the seller want the seller want at any price sell a computer, but the customer want look at and choose unhurriedly, sight him reaction.
In the second cartoon, the protagonist is a man, who is dressed with a tee-shirt, a trouser and put on with slippers. I think so it's the customer of the first cartoon.
He sits in him office. Behind him, there are the computers. He holds in him hand a candle by to use, because there was a power outage, owing to computers. In him other hand there is a telecommand. He want look disappointed.
The two cartoons are focusing the computers and his disadvantages.
The first cartoon characterizes the strength of sale the seller.
The second cartoon characterizes the compulsive buy of the customers, and their regrets, or characterizes the persons who are not familiar with computers and the new technology.
These cartoons are funny because they are caricatures and situations are exaggerated.
The message is transmit so was funny and exaggerated for that the message gets trough better.
Réponse: Description /new technology de super-eva, postée le 24-12-2008 à 17:34:59 (S | E)
je suppose qu'en rouge ce sont les erreurs et je les ai modifiées,merci beaucoup,voilà ce que ça donne :
These cartoons are in black and white and draw by Martin Eayrs, it dates from 2001. They focus on new technology, computers.
The first cartoon present two men in a shop and the second cartoon there are a man in his office.
In the first cartoon, the protagonists are two men, a customer is in left and a seller is in right. They are dressed with a costume and a tie. They are in an electrical shop.
The seller enumerates all the models of computers, while the customer looks at these ones .He looks amazed, surprised and lands questions.
I think that the seller wants at any price sell a computer at the customer, but the customer wants look at and choose unhurriedly, in view her reaction.
In the second cartoon, the protagonist is a man, who is dressed with a tee-shirt, a trouser and puts on slippers. I think it's the customer of the first cartoon.
He sits in her office. Behind him, there are the computers. He holds in her hand a candle, because there is a power outage, owing to computers. In her other hand there is a remote control. He looks disappointed.
The two cartoons are focusing the computers and her disadvantages.
The first cartoon characterizes the strength of sales of the seller.
The second cartoon characterizes the compulsive buys of the customers, and their regrets, or characterizes the persons who are not familiar with computers and a new technology.
These cartoons are funny because they are caricatures and situations are exaggerated.
The message is of transmit so was funny and exaggerated for that the message gets go better.
Réponse: Description /new technology de linsey34, postée le 24-12-2008 à 18:00:07 (S | E)
Voici les erreurs restantes corrigées en bleu:
These cartoons are in black and white and drawn by Martin Eayrs, (it dates) plutôt: they date from 2001. They focus on new technology and computers.
The first cartoon presents two men in a shop and on the second cartoon there
In the first cartoon, the protagonists are two men, a customer is
The seller enumerates all the models of computers, while the customer
I think that the seller wants to sell the customer a computer at any price , but the customer wants to look at it and chooses unhurriedly, in view her ? is it a girl? reaction.
In the second cartoon, the protagonist is a man, who is dressed with a tee-shirt, a trouser and puts on ?? slippers. I think it's the customer of the first cartoon.
He
The two cartoons are focusing on
The first cartoon characterizes the strength of sales of the seller whereas
the second cartoon characterizes the compulsive buys purchase of
These cartoons are funny because they are caricatures and situations are exaggerated.
The message is of transmit ?? so was funny and exaggerated for that the message gets go better.
Que veux-tu dire dans cette dernière phrase?
Joyeux Noël !!
Réponse: Description /new technology de super-eva, postée le 24-12-2008 à 18:10:47 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup !!! Dans la dernière phrase je veux dire que : " Le message est transmit de manière drôle et exagéré pour que le message passe mieux".Comme dit-on "chaussé de pantoufles" ?
Joyeux noël !!!-------------------
Modifié par super-eva le 24-12-2008 18:33
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