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Message de syrine1 posté le 01-04-2009 à 01:36:56 (S | E | F)
salut à tous ce dialogue montre les avantages du téléphone mobile s'il vous plaîtcorrigez Pouvez-vous me corriger ce dialogue parce que c'est urgent :
- Hi,mum is speaking ?
-yes my dear
-how are you mum ?
-I'm fine but I'm so worried about you .I miss you very much .what about you ?
-I'm really fed up .I'm leading a hellish unbearable life far from you ,my dad,my siblings.
-patient my dear it stays one year and you will return from London with a qualification if God wants.
-I hope so ,but I have a problem.
What's the matter with you ?
-I was stolen yesterday and I need money.
-ok.Don't worry .I will send to you a Manda times.
-thank you mum, I'm really so happy now .Grace in mobile phone I overcome this problem.
-yes you are right . The mobile phone shortens distances and facilitates the communication between people in the remotest parts of the world as in our situation , you are in London and I'm in Tunisia and we are in contact.
-yes , we are Lucky in this era .pass to my father the safety and I will tell you when I will receive the money , good by
-Ok,be careful of yourself .
mercien avance et si vous pouvez: faites des modifications dans ce dialogue pour qu'il soit plus bien et quel est vos de donner votre avis sur ce dernier ?
merci beaucoup
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Modifié par bridg le 01-04-2009 06:41
Message de syrine1 posté le 01-04-2009 à 01:36:56 (S | E | F)
salut à tous ce dialogue montre les avantages du téléphone mobile s'il vous plaît
- Hi,mum is speaking ?
-yes my dear
-how are you mum ?
-I'm fine but I'm so worried about you .I miss you very much .what about you ?
-I'm really fed up .I'm leading a hellish unbearable life far from you ,my dad,my siblings.
-patient my dear it stays one year and you will return from London with a qualification if God wants.
-I hope so ,but I have a problem.
What's the matter with you ?
-I was stolen yesterday and I need money.
-ok.Don't worry .I will send to you a Manda times.
-thank you mum, I'm really so happy now .Grace in mobile phone I overcome this problem.
-yes you are right . The mobile phone shortens distances and facilitates the communication between people in the remotest parts of the world as in our situation , you are in London and I'm in Tunisia and we are in contact.
-yes , we are Lucky in this era .pass to my father the safety and I will tell you when I will receive the money , good by
-Ok,be careful of yourself .
merci
merci beaucoup
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Modifié par bridg le 01-04-2009 06:41
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