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Correction/researchers in robotics
Message de linux42120 posté le 16-04-2009 à 12:06:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous.
Pendant, les vacances, on a un petit texte à faire sur l'intelligence artificielle pour savoir si il y a réellement des raisons d'avoir peur de cette dernière. Je l'ai donc fait et j'aimerais savoir s'il était possible de le corriger s'il vous plait.
Je vous remercie d'avance.
Texte:
Nowadays, more and more researchers in robotics try to start up robots which looks like the human beings: it is what we call the Artificial Intelligence (AI). The Artificial Intelligence is thus the " research a means likely to do endow the computer systems of intellectual abilities comparable to those of the human beings ". However, numerous persons distrust this last one. That is why we are going to wonder if it is necessary to be really frightened or not by the artificial intelligence and for it we shall see in one the one hand the advantages of AI and then these inconveniences.
First of all, the artificial intelligence can allow the human beings to choose during its work either to help him in the house work. It thus allows to tire less the human being.
For example, the robot or the machine endowed with a AI can say to the man that it is more advantageous to make this task than this one.
Furthermore, a machine equipped with an Artificial intelligence will allow us to make of numerous other thing in our world. For example, the machine could resolve problems which the human being cannot or then she could make dangerous things for the man.
However, the artificial intelligence can frightened.
Indeed, in an apocalyptic vision, if machines endowed of AI took the power would be the end of the humanity. For example, we can see it in the film I, Robots dircted by Alex Proyas.
Besides, due to seeing machines which think as them, the human beings could become crazy or stupid.
To conclude, I would say that endowed a machine of artificial intelligence would not be a good thing because as one goes along of time, she could replace us. Indeed on it is only an opinion but for me, the consciousness is the own of the alive bodies and there are thus reasons for being frightened by the artificial intelligence.
Merci encore.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-04-2009 13:58
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Message de linux42120 posté le 16-04-2009 à 12:06:46 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous.
Pendant, les vacances, on a un petit texte à faire sur l'intelligence artificielle pour savoir si il y a réellement des raisons d'avoir peur de cette dernière. Je l'ai donc fait et j'aimerais savoir s'il était possible de le corriger s'il vous plait.
Je vous remercie d'avance.
Texte:
Nowadays, more and more researchers in robotics try to start up robots which looks like the human beings: it is what we call the Artificial Intelligence (AI). The Artificial Intelligence is thus the " research a means likely to do endow the computer systems of intellectual abilities comparable to those of the human beings ". However, numerous persons distrust this last one. That is why we are going to wonder if it is necessary to be really frightened or not by the artificial intelligence and for it we shall see in one the one hand the advantages of AI and then these inconveniences.
First of all, the artificial intelligence can allow the human beings to choose during its work either to help him in the house work. It thus allows to tire less the human being.
For example, the robot or the machine endowed with a AI can say to the man that it is more advantageous to make this task than this one.
Furthermore, a machine equipped with an Artificial intelligence will allow us to make of numerous other thing in our world. For example, the machine could resolve problems which the human being cannot or then she could make dangerous things for the man.
However, the artificial intelligence can frightened.
Indeed, in an apocalyptic vision, if machines endowed of AI took the power would be the end of the humanity. For example, we can see it in the film I, Robots dircted by Alex Proyas.
Besides, due to seeing machines which think as them, the human beings could become crazy or stupid.
To conclude, I would say that endowed a machine of artificial intelligence would not be a good thing because as one goes along of time, she could replace us. Indeed on it is only an opinion but for me, the consciousness is the own of the alive bodies and there are thus reasons for being frightened by the artificial intelligence.
Merci encore.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-04-2009 13:58
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Réponse: Correction/researchers in robotics de linux42120, postée le 18-04-2009 à 12:40:24 (S | E)
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