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Phrase correcte ou pas?
Message de max59 posté le 24-05-2009 à 12:10:18 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
est-ce que cette phrase est correcte (gram + ortho)

Merci



Concerning ADS-B implementations in the world,
Alaska is one of the first countries with ADS-B ground stations in use. The Federal Aviation Administration had decided to launch an ADS-B program because radars in Alaska can’t detect aircraft targets flying at low altitude

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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-05-2009 22:55
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Réponse: Phrase correcte ou pas? de andrewfurlow, postée le 24-05-2009 à 15:14:01 (S | E)
The English is fine, but Alaska is not a country. It is a state within the United States.

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Réponse: Phrase correcte ou pas? de jonquille, postée le 25-05-2009 à 03:42:02 (S | E)
Alaska is one of the first countries with ADS-B ground stations in use. The Federal Aviation Administration had decided to launch an ADS-B program because radars in Alaska can’t detect aircraft targets flying at low altitude.

1. Alaska is not a country, but a state within the USA
2. had decided.....can't = these 2 tenses don't work together.

Depending on the context of the entire document, try either has decided.... or simply: decided

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