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Message de jade974 posté le 06-09-2009 à 11:45:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour! Pourriez-vous corriger mes fautes svp?
• Pete’s grandfather had put the rod in Pete’s room because children would played with it.
• There was a real untidy in Pete’s room. Infact, there were things which dragged on the ground.
• It was a Scotsman who owns the place.
• He had heard the sound of Pete’s boat engine.
• Pete hadn’t a cellphone Ian had yelled for Pete’s repaired him.
• He could cycled to Pete house, gone to the river for fishing and he could come back at home to learn his homework.
• In 50’s, all people who lived in a reserve was indian.
• At the beginning we say that the reserve store was located near the lake.
• Pete’s grandfather was smoking sat on the walking of staircase and he had the glance lost in the lake when Ian arrived.
• Pete was already in the river When Ian arrived. Infact Pete’s grandfather confirmed that Pete wasn’t at home.
Message de jade974 posté le 06-09-2009 à 11:45:38 (S | E | F)
Bonjour! Pourriez-vous corriger mes fautes svp?
• Pete’s grandfather had put the rod in Pete’s room because children would played with it.
• There was a real untidy in Pete’s room. Infact, there were things which dragged on the ground.
• It was a Scotsman who owns the place.
• He had heard the sound of Pete’s boat engine.
• Pete hadn’t a cellphone Ian had yelled for Pete’s repaired him.
• He could cycled to Pete house, gone to the river for fishing and he could come back at home to learn his homework.
• In 50’s, all people who lived in a reserve was indian.
• At the beginning we say that the reserve store was located near the lake.
• Pete’s grandfather was smoking sat on the walking of staircase and he had the glance lost in the lake when Ian arrived.
• Pete was already in the river When Ian arrived. Infact Pete’s grandfather confirmed that Pete wasn’t at home.
Réponse: Correction de phrases de seb06000, postée le 06-09-2009 à 12:04:16 (S | E)
bonjour,
je vous indique les pistes de correction
Pete’s grandfather had put the rod in Pete’s room because children would played (structure verbale à revoir) with it.
• There was a (pourquoi un article?) real untidy (expression à revoir) in Pete’s room. In fact, there were things which dragged (non pas "trainer" dans ce sens!, il y a un autre verbe!) on the ground.
• It was a Scotsman who owns the place.
• He had heard the sound of Pete’s boat engine.
• Pete hadn’t a cellphone Ian had yelled (verbe incorrecte) for Pete’s repaired him.
• He could cycled (structure verbale à revoir) to Pete ( genitif?) house, gone ( à revoir), cf "cycled") to the river for fishing ( For incorrect, autre préposition nécessaire et attention à la forme verbale) and he could come back at home to learn his homework (verbe ne va pas avec homework).
• In 50’s, all people who lived in a reserve was (all+singulier? à revoir) indian.
• At the beginning we say that the reserve store was located near the lake.
• Pete’s grandfather was smoking sat (forme de 'sat' à revoir) on the walking ( voc) of staircase and he had the glance lost ( calque du français) in the lake when Ian arrived.
• Pete was already in the river When Ian arrived. Infact Pete’s grandfather confirmed that Pete wasn’t at home.
Voilà si vous avez besoin d'aide n'hésitez pas!
Amicalement
sébastien
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Modifié par seb06000 le 06-09-2009 12:04
Réponse: Correction de phrases de jade974, postée le 07-09-2009 à 13:41:43 (S | E)
Merci de votre aide!! je vais essayer de modifier mes phrases avec vos pistes. A bientôt!
Réponse: Correction de phrases de jade974, postée le 07-09-2009 à 14:34:42 (S | E)
Bonjour! J'avais posté un sujet la dernière fois et monsieur sébastion m'avais donné des pistes pour me corriger j'ai essayer de les suivre alors voilà le résultat (pourriez vous me corriger svp?):
Pete’s grandfather had put the rod in Pete’s room because children wanted to play with it.
• Pete’s room was in a mess.
• It was a Scotsman who owns the place.
• He had heard the sound of Pete’s boat engine.
• Pete hadn’t a cellphone Ian had roared for Pete’s repaired him.
• He could cycle to Pete’s house, go to the river to fish and he could come back at home to do his homework.
• In 50’s, people who lived in a reserve was indian.
• At the beginning we say that the reserve store was located near the lake.
• Pete’s grandfather was sitting and smoking on the step of staircase and stared into space when Ian arrived.
• Pete was already in the river When Ian arrived. Infact Pete’s grandfather confirmed that Pete wasn’t at home.
Je vous remercie d'avance
Réponse: Correction de phrases de seb06000, postée le 07-09-2009 à 17:54:30 (S | E)
Monsieur Sebastion vous dit si c'est bon
• Pete’s room was in a mess( bien ou 'was messy').
• It was a Scotsman who owns the place (attention à la concordance du temps de 'own', il doit être au même temps que la 1ere phrase ).
• He had heard the sound of Pete’s boat engine (parfait!) .
• Pete hadn’t a cellphone Ian had roared (non roared ne marche pas. Que voulez-vous dire?) for Pete’s repaired him.
• He could cycle to Pete’s house, go to the river to fish and he could come back at home to do his homework. (bien)
• In 50’s (il manque l'article), people who lived in a reserve was (non people est pluriel donc le verbe doit être au ......pluriel) indian.
• At the beginning we say that the reserve store was located near the lake.
• Pete’s grandfather was sitting and smoking on the step of staircase and stared into space (non l'expression n'est pas correcte) when Ian arrived.
• Pete was already in the river When Ian arrived. In fact Pete’s grandfather confirmed that Pete wasn’t at home (ok)
Courage, ce ne sont que des détails à corriger!
Seb
Réponse: Correction de phrases de jade974, postée le 08-09-2009 à 11:18:43 (S | E)
Je vous remercie encore une fois. Bon je vais essayer de me corriger comme c'est pour cet après midi je vais faire de mon mieux merci! et à bientôt!
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