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Global warming
Message de sabrineee posté le 09-01-2010 à 12:44:59 (S | E | F)
bonjour, j'ai un petit texte à faire à propos de:
what's global warming doing to the environment?
j'ai fait un petit travail mais j'aimerais bien que vous me corrigiez impeux un peu pour l'ameliorer .
Merci pour vos réponses.

global warming is affecting many parts of the world, global warming make the sea rise and when the sea rises the water covers many low land island.this is a big problem for many plants, animal and people on islands.the water covers the plants and causes some of them to die .when they die , animals lose a source of food ,along with their habitat .althought animals have a better ability to adabt to what happens hant plants do, thy may die also. when the plants and animals die , peole lose two sources of food , plants food ans animal food .they may also have to leave the area or die.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-01-2010 12:49

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Réponse: Global warming de gerondif, postée le 09-01-2010 à 16:06:00 (S | E)
Bonjour,

quelques fautes de frappe ....et quelques s à remettre.

global warming is affecting many parts of the world, global warming make(3eme personne = s) the sea rise and when the sea rises the water covers many low land island(pluriel derrière many).this is a big problem for many plants, animal(pluriel) and people on islands.the water covers the plants and causes some of them to die .when they die , animals lose a source of food ,along with their habitat .althought(un t en trop) animals have a better ability to adabt to what happens hant plants do, thy may die also(serait plus élégant placé devant le verbe). when the plants and animals die , peole lose two sources of food , plants food ans animal food .they may also have to leave the area or die.

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