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Message de patouch93 posté le 10-01-2010 à 15:03:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
J’ai un devoir à faire, il consiste à faire une phrase avec chaque mot ci-dessous, pourriez-vous me les corriger ? Merci d’avance,
1. Lung (poumon) [The lungs serve us to breathe]
2. Reliable (fiable, sûr) [This program mis reliable]
3. Rude (malpoli) [Some people are rude]
4. Helmet (le casque) [The helmet is very importante when we ski]
5. Novel (roman) [I started writing a novel a few weeks ago]
6. Trust (faire confiance) [I trust my friends]
7. Valuable (précieux, de prix) [A golden necklace, is a valuable present]
8. Rowing (l’aviron) [The rowing is a very physical sport]
9. Part-time (temps partiel) [The mothers work often part-time]
10. Paid-holidays (congé payés) [The workers who work many have paid holidays]
11. Unemployed (sans travail) [The persons who did not study, meet often unemployed]
12. Look after (s’occuper de) [I look after my lottle brothers when my parents go out]
13. Be responsible of (être en charge de) [I'm responsible for my brother when my parents where not there]
14. Make a living (gagner sa vie) [it is necessary to work to earn a living]
15. At short notice (à court délai) [This book should be return at short notice]
16. Whereas (tandis que) [I prefer ices, whereas my mother prefers cakes]
17. Cheek (la joue) [I make-up my cheeks]
18. Foreigner (l’étranger) [When we go in another country to holidays, we are foreigners.]
19. Free (gratuit) [Some stores give free samples]
20. Degree (le diplôme) [I study to have my degree]
21. Date (le rendez-vous) [I have a date this afternoon]
22. Costumer (le client) [This store has many customers.]
23. Taste (le goût) [This cake has a good taste]
24. Grant (la bourse universitaire) [It’s necessary have a grant before to go to the university]
Message de patouch93 posté le 10-01-2010 à 15:03:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
J’ai un devoir à faire, il consiste à faire une phrase avec chaque mot ci-dessous, pourriez-vous me les corriger ? Merci d’avance,
1. Lung (poumon) [The lungs serve us to breathe]
2. Reliable (fiable, sûr) [This program mis reliable]
3. Rude (malpoli) [Some people are rude]
4. Helmet (le casque) [The helmet is very importante when we ski]
5. Novel (roman) [I started writing a novel a few weeks ago]
6. Trust (faire confiance) [I trust my friends]
7. Valuable (précieux, de prix) [A golden necklace, is a valuable present]
8. Rowing (l’aviron) [The rowing is a very physical sport]
9. Part-time (temps partiel) [The mothers work often part-time]
10. Paid-holidays (congé payés) [The workers who work many have paid holidays]
11. Unemployed (sans travail) [The persons who did not study, meet often unemployed]
12. Look after (s’occuper de) [I look after my lottle brothers when my parents go out]
13. Be responsible of (être en charge de) [I'm responsible for my brother when my parents where not there]
14. Make a living (gagner sa vie) [it is necessary to work to earn a living]
15. At short notice (à court délai) [This book should be return at short notice]
16. Whereas (tandis que) [I prefer ices, whereas my mother prefers cakes]
17. Cheek (la joue) [I make-up my cheeks]
18. Foreigner (l’étranger) [When we go in another country to holidays, we are foreigners.]
19. Free (gratuit) [Some stores give free samples]
20. Degree (le diplôme) [I study to have my degree]
21. Date (le rendez-vous) [I have a date this afternoon]
22. Costumer (le client) [This store has many customers.]
23. Taste (le goût) [This cake has a good taste]
24. Grant (la bourse universitaire) [It’s necessary have a grant before to go to the university]
Réponse: Correction de seb06000, postée le 10-01-2010 à 15:15:16 (S | E)
bonjour,
je vous indique ce qui ne va pas
1-The lungs serve (help plutôt) us to breathe
2-This program mis reliable ( attention petite faute de frappe)
4-[The helmet is very importante (ortho) when we ski]
8-The (article inutile devant les concepts) rowing is a very physical sport
9-The mothers work often part-time (place de often dans la phrase)
10-The workers who work many( many s'utilise avec un dénombrable, quelque chose que l'on compte) have paid holidays
11-The persons who did not study, meet often unemployed] (sens?)
12- I look after my lottle (ortho) brothers when my parents go out]
13-I'm responsible for my brother when my parents where (where n'est pas un verbe) not there]*
14-it is necessary to work to earn( ce n'est pas le verbe qui est donné) a living]
24-[It’s necessary (il manque une préposition) have a grant before to go to the university]
Voilà des détails!
Amicalement
sébastien
Réponse: Correction de patouch93, postée le 10-01-2010 à 18:38:54 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Merci pour de m'avoir indiquer mes fautes, mais je ne comprends pas la 14, quand vous dites ( ce n'est pas le verbe qui est donné) pourriez-vous être plus clair?
Réponse: Correction de mamediarra, postée le 10-01-2010 à 19:37:10 (S | E)
ok
Réponse: Correction de brettdallen, postée le 10-01-2010 à 19:54:57 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Vérifiez à "living", vous trouverez "m... a living"(gagner sa vie).
Amicalement.
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