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Message de carton99 posté le 26-04-2010 à 15:12:04 (S | E | F)
Bonjour je suis toujours en révision, j’ai fait une petite interview pour revoir la politesse et les questions.
Pourriez-vous corriger mes fautes s'il vous plaît?

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J:Excuse me are you Carton99 ?
C99:Yes I am .Pleased to meet you .who[whom ??] are you?
J:Sorry of you mind[bother ??],I am a journalist ,may you ask some questions ?
C99: Yes you do. I have some minute of free.
J:How many has you developed video games ?
C99: I developed [had developed ??]ten video games, but I stopped make it.
J:How much people did play at yours videos games?
C99:More ten thousands.
J: Thank for yours answers.
C99:It’s been a pleasure ,bye.
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Modifié par carton99 le 26-04-2010 15:39

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Modifié par carton99 le 26-04-2010 15:40

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Réponse: Essay-interview de notrepere, postée le 26-04-2010 à 18:45:52 (S | E)
Hello:

This looks like the results from an automatic translator...

You'll probably get better responses if you post the original French too.

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Réponse: Essay-interview de carton99, postée le 26-04-2010 à 19:10:28 (S | E)
lol je suis aussi nul que sa !!
Le texte sort complètement de mon imagination, il n'existe pas de texte français.
J'ai utilisé mes cours et le dictionnaire pour écrire ce texte.
Les phrases sont un peu tordues mais c'est pour travailler ou j'ai des lacunes.
Mon but c’est justement de travailler la politesse dans un discourt et de faire des questions.

Pourriez vous quand même corriger les fautes même si il y en a beaucoup.Merci.

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Réponse: Essay-interview de dolfine56, postée le 26-04-2010 à 19:17:19 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

to begin with...
J:Excuse me are you Carton99 ?
C99:Yes I am .Pleased to meet you .who[whom ??] are you?
J:Sorry of you mind[bother ??],I am a journalist ,may you mauvais sujet ask manque un pronom personnelsome any,pour une interrogation questions ?
C99: Yes you do. mauvais auxilliaire I have some minute of free mal dit

vous traduisez trop "mot à mot". Il faut essayer de penser en anglais...

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Réponse: Essay-interview de carton99, postée le 26-04-2010 à 19:40:29 (S | E)
Merci ,
la remarque "mot à mot" est vraiment récurente chez moi ,mais je vois pas comment penser autrement.
J'ai modifié le texte.Comme je pouvais.


J:Excuse me are you Carton99 ?
C99:Yes I am .Pleased to meet you .who are you?
J:I am a journalist ,May I ask yourself any questions ?
C99: Yes you may. I have spare time.
J:How many has you developed video games ?
C99: I developed ten video games, but I stopped do it.
J:How much people had played at yours videos games?
C99:More than ten thousands.
J: Thank for yours answers.
C99:It’s been a pleasure ,bye.


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Modifié par carton99 le 26-04-2010 19:44

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Réponse: Essay-interview de dolfine56, postée le 26-04-2010 à 19:50:03 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
:Excuse me are you Carton99 ?
C99:Yes I am .Pleased to meet you .who are you?
J:I am a journalist ,May I ask yourself any questions ?
C99: Yes you may. I have spare some free time.
J:How many has you developed video games ?mal placé: le cod,juste après le verbe.
C99: Ihave developed ten video games, but I stopped do it.
J:How much people did mal placé play at yours videos games?
C99:More than ten thousands.pas de "s"
J: Thank for yours answers.
C99:It’s been a pleasure ,bye

et j'en oublie sans doute....
bon courage

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Réponse: Essay-interview de carton99, postée le 26-04-2010 à 20:14:11 (S | E)
Merci ,
voici ma corection.

J:Excuse me are you Carton99 ?
C99:Yes I am .Pleased to meet you .who are you?
J:I am a journalist ,May I ask your any questions ?
C99: Yes you may. I have some free time.
J:How many video games has you developed ?
C99: I have developed ten video games, but I stopped it.
J:How many people play yours videos games?[sauf que je veux dire :combien de gens ont joué à t’es jeux videos?,d'ou "How many people have played yours videos games?"]
C99:More than ten thousand.
J: Thank for yours answers.
C99:It’s been a pleasure ,bye


J'avoue ne pas comprendre le "I stopped it" car je veux dire "j'arrête d'en faire."

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Modifié par carton99 le 26-04-2010 20:15

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Réponse: Essay-interview de dolfine56, postée le 26-04-2010 à 21:02:45 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

:Excuse me are you Carton99 ?
C99:Yes I am .Pleased to meet you .who are you?
J:I am a journalist ,May I ask your (pronom sujet=you; pronom possessif=yours )any questions ?
C99: Yes you may. je mettrais "can" I have some free time.
J:How many video games has you developed ?
C99: I have developed ten video games, but I stopped it.
J:How many people play yours videos games?[sauf que je veux dire :combien de gens ont joué à t’es tes=possessif jeux videos?,d'ou "How many people have played yours video cette dernière phrase est juste
color=#FF0000>s games?"]
C99:More than ten thousand.
J: Thank for yours answers.
C99:It’s been a pleasure ,bye

you= pronom personnel: you work
your= adjectif possessif: your dog is nice
yours= pronom possessif: my dogs are nice, yours are beautiful.
on dit to play something.
à vous...

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Réponse: Essay-interview de notrepere, postée le 26-04-2010 à 21:49:29 (S | E)
Hello:

J:How many video games has ( the subject is "you") you developed ?
C99: I have developed ten video games, but I stopped it but I have stopped making them.
J: Thank [what word is missing?] for yours answers time.
C99:It’s been a pleasure ,bye




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Modifié par notrepere le 26-04-2010 21:50

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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-04-2010 22:34

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Modifié par notrepere le 27-04-2010 03:51

Thank you, lucile83. Vous avez raison. Modestement.

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Réponse: Essay-interview de carton99, postée le 27-04-2010 à 12:49:53 (S | E)
oki pour "yours",
merci.

J:Excuse me are you Carton99 ?
C99:Yes I am .Pleased to meet you .who are you?
J:I am a journalist ,May I ask your any questions ?
C99: Yes you can. I have some free time.
J:How many video games has you developed ?
C99: I have developed ten video games, but I have stopped making them.
J:How many people has played yours video games?
C99:More than ten thousand.
J: Thank for yours time.
C99:It’s been a pleasure ,bye

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Réponse: Essay-interview de khalid1970, postée le 27-04-2010 à 17:15:30 (S | E)
Bonjour,
il reste quand meme quelques petites fautes:

J:Excuse me, are you Carton99 ?
C99:Yes, I am .Pleased to meet you .who are you?
J:I am a journalist ,. May I ask your any on ne peut pas dire ça, some questions ?
C99: Yes, you can. I have some free time.
J:How many video games has you developed ?
C99: I have developed ten video games, but I have stopped making them.
J:How many people has played yours video games?
C99:More than ten thousand.
J: Thanks for yours time.
C99:It’s been a pleasure ,bye.

cordialement

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