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Correction/Children's decisions
Message de welh posté le 10-05-2010 à 00:01:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis élève de 1erS, n'ayant pas un "excellent niveau" en anglais, je me permets de demander de l'aide, surtout en grammaire.
Le sujet est : Should the parentsshould interfere(s) with their children's decisions?
Parents are an integral part of the child's education, they help, advise him and accompany him throughout his child's life.
However the parents should "interferes with Their Children's decisions?
The child / adolecsent are constantly need advice, they grew up, are constantly on the path of discovery, and the parents are here to help in his child evolution, giving them advices etc. .. They have even lived at the age of their children, that's why they have the experience and can guide them.
But if the parent interfer in the decision of their children, will not to make the child mature. Indeed, That is better to leave these decisions, children are old Enough to take decisions and If They Fail, They Will learn by Their Own Mistakes.
Finally, I think that if the child takes a decision, it’s his own choice and it is necessary that his parents respect this.
Then, as for instance career looks, parents Have experience, goal as I Said Before, May Things Have Changed. What I mean Is The Employers' mentality May not Be the same as 30 years ago. So let solely responsible for its successes and its error will help to ripen better.
Voilà ! Merci pour vos réponses.
Cordialement.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-05-2010 07:53
Message de welh posté le 10-05-2010 à 00:01:45 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Je suis élève de 1erS, n'ayant pas un "excellent niveau" en anglais, je me permets de demander de l'aide, surtout en grammaire.
Le sujet est : Should the parents
Parents are an integral part of the child's education, they help, advise him and accompany him throughout his child's life.
However the parents should "interferes with Their Children's decisions?
The child / adolecsent are constantly need advice, they grew up, are constantly on the path of discovery, and the parents are here to help in his child evolution, giving them advices etc. .. They have even lived at the age of their children, that's why they have the experience and can guide them.
But if the parent interfer in the decision of their children, will not to make the child mature. Indeed, That is better to leave these decisions, children are old Enough to take decisions and If They Fail, They Will learn by Their Own Mistakes.
Finally, I think that if the child takes a decision, it’s his own choice and it is necessary that his parents respect this.
Then, as for instance career looks, parents Have experience, goal as I Said Before, May Things Have Changed. What I mean Is The Employers' mentality May not Be the same as 30 years ago. So let solely responsible for its successes and its error will help to ripen better.
Voilà ! Merci pour vos réponses.
Cordialement.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-05-2010 07:53
Réponse: Correction/Children's decisions de ricou81, postée le 10-05-2010 à 14:20:06 (S | E)
Bonjour, quelques remarques
dans le 1er paragraphe, reprendre "should parents interfere with their...?"
Dans le texte, je pense qu'il faut choisir si c'est singulier "child" ou pluriel "children" (cohérence)
- are constantly need advice, they grow up (grew c'est le prétérit)
-if the parents interfere with...
Bon courage
Réponse: Correction/Children's decisions de notrepere, postée le 11-05-2010 à 05:58:14 (S | E)
Hello: "Then, as for instance career looks, parents Have experience, goal as I Said Before, May Things Have Changed. What I mean Is The Employers' mentality May not Be the same as 30 years ago. So let solely responsible for its successes and its error will help to ripen better."
Just a general comment...
Only "proper nouns" should be capitalized (en majuscules)
In the paragraph above, only the word "I" should be capitalized. There are many other examples throughout your text.
I don't have any idea what this paragraph means. Try to shorten and simplify your sentences so that they are more understandable. If you wish to write what you want to say in French, we might have a better idea what you mean.
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Modifié par notrepere le 14-05-2010 18:15
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