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Internship application
Message de lealouise posté le 07-09-2010 à 23:30:39 (S | E | F)
Hello.
Could you give tell me if my email is correct ?
Thank you for your help!

Dear Madam,

Further to your last email you seemed to be interested in my internship application. Knowing that I would love to be part of your team too, I am currently seeking grants form my area.
Indeed "***group" could offer me an entry level job experience for me to learn about the real estate sector.
I will be available from November, time to obtain my visa J1 which is compulsory to work legally in the United States, or lately at your convenience.

Please, could you let me know if you're still interested in ?
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Edited by lucile83 on 07-09-2010 23:32
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Réponse: Internship application de may, postée le 08-09-2010 à 03:08:20 (S | E)
Bonsoir,

It's good, just a few touches to make more sense:

Dear Madam,

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Bonne chance,

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Réponse: Internship application de lealouise, postée le 08-09-2010 à 10:39:10 (S | E)
Thank you for your help !

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