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Correction- some sentences 3
Message de toto-yoyo posté le 13-11-2010 à 13:05:06 (S | E | F)
Hello,

I still have some sentences to correct. It's not very long to correct.

1)The auction that was held was a : Charity bachelors auction

2)They were auctioning bachelor guys.

3)The auctioneer was Krusty the clown.

4)Apu, a guy who have a doctorate in computer science was bought for 926$.

5)A lotus is a flower. It is a sign that it is time to Apu to get his arranged married.

6)Apu said to his mother that he is already married.

7)So, his mother came to meet Apu’s wife.

8)Homer suggested Apu to say that his wife was Marge.

9)Homer went to visit his father.

10)The mother is fooled because she didn’t realize that the children didn’t have the Hindu’s color skin.

11)For a serve depression, the bartender recommended: “Booze, booze and more booze”.

12)Apu and his real wife got married in Homer’s garden.

13)At the beginning, Apu was sad, but and the end he was happy to got married with a beautiful and nice girl.

Thanks

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Modifié par lucile83 le 13-11-2010 13:37

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Réponse: Correction- some sentences 3 de notrepere, postée le 13-11-2010 à 23:36:42 (S | E)
Hello!

1)The auction that was held was a : [à supprimer] Charity [pas de majuscule] bachelors [pas de s] auction

2)They were auctioning bachelors guys.

3)The auctioneer was Krusty the clown [majuscule].

4)Apu, a guy who have [accorde] a doctorate in computer science[virgule] was bought for 926$ [$ avant les nombres].

5)A lotus is a flower. It is a sign that it is time to [un autre préposition] Apu to get his arranged married.

6)Apu said to (told) his mother that he is (was) already married.

8)Homer suggested that Apu to say that his wife was Marge.

10)The mother is [au passé] fooled because she didn’t realize that the children didn’t have the Hindu’s color skin.

11)For a serve [orthographe] depression, the bartender recommended: “Booze, booze and more booze”.

13)At the beginning, Apu was sad, but and (in) the end he was happy to [pronom: 'il'] got married with (to) a beautiful and nice girl.

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Réponse: Correction- some sentences 3 de toto-yoyo, postée le 14-11-2010 à 10:30:53 (S | E)
Hello,


Thanks for your help.
Is it better now ?


1)The auction that was held was a charity bachelor auction.

2)They were auctioning bachelors.

3)The auctioneer was Krusty the Clown.

4)Apu, a guy who had a doctorate in computer science, was bought for $926.

5)A lotus is a flower. It is a sign that it is time for Apu to get his arranged married.

6)Apu told his mother that he was already married.

7)So, his mother came to meet Apu’s wife.

8)Homer suggested that Apu say that his wife was Marge.

9)Homer went to visit his father.

10)The mother was fooled because she didn’t realize that the children didn’t have the Hindu’s color skin.

11)For a severe depression, the bartender recommended: “Booze, booze and more booze”.

12)Apu and his real wife got married in Homer’s garden.

13)At the beginning, Apu was sad, but in the end he was happy he got married to a beautiful and nice girl.


Thanks.

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Réponse: Correction- some sentences 3 de notrepere, postée le 14-11-2010 à 15:38:23 (S | E)
Hello!

J'ai manqué une erreur:

10)The mother was fooled because she didn’t realize that the children didn’t have the Hindu’s color skin [ordre des mots].

Le reste me semble correct.

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Réponse: Correction- some sentences 3 de toto-yoyo, postée le 14-11-2010 à 18:24:37 (S | E)
Exacte, ça sonne mieux lol.

Merci pour ton aide.

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