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Message de imane_16 posté le 25-01-2011 à 16:09:49 (S | E | F)
Helloeverybody,
Could you please help me to correct these sentences and give methe explanations:
- Jammal is a little strong.
jamaal isn't very stronger
- Nabil is quite timid.
Nabil is very timid
-Jammal prefers basketball than the internet
jammal prefers basketball more than internet
- Nabil likes very much web chats.
Nabil adores web chats
- jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer
jammal doesn't have a cell phone neither a personal computer
- Nabil doesn't have a lot of friends.
nabil doesn't have lots of friends
- Jammal can drive, but Nabil not.
jammal can drive,instead of nabil
- However Nabil is shy, he is friendly.
although nabil is shy, he is friendly
- jamaal doesn't concentrate a lot on his schoolwork.
jamaal doesn't care about his schoolwork
- Nabil works hard for to get good marks.
Nabil works hard to get good marks
_ what is your opinion about children who take responsibility at a young age ?
my anwser : In my opinion, it's depent of the nature of this responsability, obviously,we should learn our children how to take their own responsibility in a sample thing like being tidiness,keeping toys and respect the rules, but living them alone and oblige them to take care of the whole house isn't a good thing,
thank you in advance
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Edited by imane_16 on 25-01-2011 16:50
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Edited by lucile83 on 25-01-2011 19:17
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Message de imane_16 posté le 25-01-2011 à 16:09:49 (S | E | F)
Hello
Could you please help me to correct these sentences and give me
- Jammal is a little strong.
jamaal isn't very stronger
- Nabil is quite timid.
Nabil is very timid
-Jammal prefers basketball than the internet
jammal prefers basketball more than internet
- Nabil likes very much web chats.
Nabil adores web chats
- jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer
jammal doesn't have a cell phone neither a personal computer
- Nabil doesn't have a lot of friends.
nabil doesn't have lots of friends
- Jammal can drive, but Nabil not.
jammal can drive,instead of nabil
- However Nabil is shy, he is friendly.
although nabil is shy, he is friendly
- jamaal doesn't concentrate a lot on his schoolwork.
jamaal doesn't care about his schoolwork
- Nabil works hard for to get good marks.
Nabil works hard to get good marks
_ what is your opinion about children who take responsibility at a young age ?
my anwser : In my opinion, it's depent of the nature of this responsability, obviously,we should learn our children how to take their own responsibility in a sample thing like being tidiness,keeping toys and respect the rules, but living them alone and oblige them to take care of the whole house isn't a good thing,
thank you in advance
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Edited by imane_16 on 25-01-2011 16:50
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Edited by lucile83 on 25-01-2011 19:17
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Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 25-01-2011 à 17:36:46 (S | E)
Hi there,
what is your try?
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de imane_16, postée le 25-01-2011 à 18:52:19 (S | E)
Hello,
I have written my answers
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Edited by lucile83 on 25-01-2011 19:21
Ce n'était pas clair du tout! la présentation est importante.
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 26-01-2011 à 09:17:04 (S | E)
Bonjour,
On vous demande de repérer les erreurs et de les corriger.
"- Jammal is a little strong.
jamaal isn't very stronger: faux
- Nabil is quite (cherchez un autre adverbe)timid.
Nabil is very timid
-Jammal prefers basketball than the internet
jammal prefers basketball more than internet
- Nabil likes very much (en fin de phrase)web chats.
Nabil adores web chats
- jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a (Il n'a aucun portable) personal computer
jammal doesn't have a cell phone neither a personal computer
- Nabil doesn't have a lot of friends.
nabil doesn't have lots of friends
- Jammal can drive, but Nabil not.
jammal can drive,instead of nabil
- However Nabil is shy (il faut inverser: adjectif/sujet/verbe), he is friendly.
although nabil is shy, he is friendly
- jamaal doesn't concentrate a lot on his schoolwork.
jamaal doesn't care about his schoolwork(On ne dit pas qu'il n'a rien à fiche de ses devoirs, on dit qu'il n'est pas concentré)
- Nabil works hard for to get good marks.
Nabil works hard to get good marks" Juste
Je vais revenir quand je serai un peu mieux réveillée.
Cordialement.
Headway.
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de imane_16, postée le 26-01-2011 à 13:55:34 (S | E)
bonjour,
-jamal isn't very strong.
-Nabil is very timid
-jammal prefers basketball to the internet
-Nabil likes web chats very much.
-jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer
- nabil doesn't have lots of friends
-jamal can drive, but nabil can't
-however shy is Nabil, he is friendly
- jamaal doesn't concentrate very much in his schoolwork
merci infiniment pour votre aide
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 26-01-2011 à 14:09:54 (S | E)
Re-bonjour,
je vous aide un peu:
To prefer something to.
However tired I am, I'm willing to help you...
À vous d'apporter les corrections.
Headway.
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de imane_16, postée le 26-01-2011 à 21:01:26 (S | E)
good afternoon,
-jamal isn't very strong.
-Nabil is very timid
-jammal prefers basketball to the internet
-Nabil likes web chats very much.
-jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer
- nabil doesn't have lots of friends
-jamal can drive, but nabil can't
-however shy is Nabil, he is friendly
- jamaal doesn't concentrate very much in his schoolwork
it's ok now ?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-01-2011 21:03
Couleur du texte.
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Modifié par imane_16 le 26-01-2011 21:06
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 26-01-2011 à 21:23:37 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
"jamal isn't very strong... Pourquoi "is" devient "isn't"?
-Nabil is very timid.. assez/plutôt
-jammal prefers basketball to the internet ok
-Nabil likes web chats very much.ok
-jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a personal computer
- nabil doesn't have lots of friends
-jamal can drive, but nabil can't...ok
-however shy is Nabil, he is friendly...However+ adjectif+sujet+verb
- jamaal doesn't concentrate very much in his schoolwork
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de may, postée le 27-01-2011 à 01:00:07 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
I correct the last part of yours
what is your opinion about children who take responsibility at a young age ?
my anwser : In my opinion, it
Hope this helps,
About previous sentences, remember to capitalize all personal names please!
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 29-01-2011 à 17:26:17 (S | E)
Bonjour,
- Nabil doesn't have a lot of friends.
nabil doesn't have lots of friends
Ici, la phrase est négative, "many" irait mieux.
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de imane_16, postée le 31-01-2011 à 16:25:24 (S | E)
merci bien pour votre aide
Réponse: Correction/ sentences de headway, postée le 31-01-2011 à 17:51:06 (S | E)
Bonjour,
Il faut corriger cette phrase:
"- jammal doesn't have a cell phone and a (Il n'a aucun portable) personal computer
jammal doesn't have a cell phone neither a personal computer"
Headway.
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