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Message de yaonee posté le 20-08-2011 à 23:50:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai reçu quelques phrases à traduire, c'est pour m'entrainer.Je ne sais pas si les traduction que j'ai mises sont correctes.J'aimerais avoir vos opinions et faire les modifications si nécessaire.
Merci beaucoup :-)
Consigne : Traduire, Attention au Discours Rapporté (Parole, Pensée)
1. Il s'aperçut qu'il avait commis 1 erreur, mais c'était trop tard
2. Elle l'avait vu auparavant, mais elle ignorait qu'il était membre du groupe
3. Quand je lui ai téléphoné, j'ai cru deviner qu'il avait bu
4. Elle parlait, elle parlait .... Elle avait tout vu, elle avait été partout, elle avait tout essayé
5. Quand j'entrais, je vis qu'il avait pleuré. Je lui demandais ce qui s'était passé. Il me répondit qu'il avait dormi tout l'après midi
6. Je savais qu'il m'avait menti tout le temps. Je lui demandais combien de personnes il avait rencontrées ce jour-là
7. On m'en avait déjà parlé mais j'avais déjà oublié
8. Je me demandais s'il avait oublié sa promesse. Je savais qu'il la voyait depuis 2 mois
9. On m'apprit qu'il avait passé 2 ans en prison avant d'être relâché
10. On me dit qu'il avait commencé à écrire 2 ans auparavant
11. Je lui demandais si elle avait fini. Elle ne répondit pas. Apparemment elle n'avait pas entendu ce que j'avais dit.
12. je savais qu'il vivait avec eux depuis 2 mois
13. Je me demandais depuis combien de temps il travaillait pour elle
14. Je ne pouvais comprendre pourquoi il avait vendu cette maison
15. Je savais qu'elle avait été achetée par son frère
16. Quand j'entrai je sus qu'il avait parlé de moi
1. He noticed that he had been commiting an error but it was too late
2. She had been seeing him before, but she was ignoring that he was a member of the band
3. When I called him, I thought I was guessing that he had been drinking
4. She was speaking, she was speaking ... She saw everything, she was everywhere, she was trying everything
5. When I went in , I saw that he had been crying. I asked to him what's going on. He was replying to me that he had been sleeping all the afternnon
6. I knew that he had been lying everytime. I asked to him
7. People had speak to me but I have already forgotten
8. I asked to him if he had forgotten his promise. I knew that he had been seeing her for 2 months
9. They learned to me that he had been in jail for 2 years before to be relaxed
10. People said to me that he was beginning to write 2 years before
11. I asked to him if she had finished. She is replying to me "No" apparently, she hadn't seen that I had been teeling
12. I knew that he had been living with them for 2 months
13. I requested how many time did he work with her
14. I couldn't reply why he had been selling this house
15. I knew that she had bought by her brother
16. When I went in , I knew that he had been speaking about me
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-08-2011 08:47
Message de yaonee posté le 20-08-2011 à 23:50:05 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
j'ai reçu quelques phrases à traduire, c'est pour m'entrainer.Je ne sais pas si les traduction que j'ai mises sont correctes.J'aimerais avoir vos opinions et faire les modifications si nécessaire.
Merci beaucoup :-)
Consigne : Traduire, Attention au Discours Rapporté (Parole, Pensée)
1. Il s'aperçut qu'il avait commis 1 erreur, mais c'était trop tard
2. Elle l'avait vu auparavant, mais elle ignorait qu'il était membre du groupe
3. Quand je lui ai téléphoné, j'ai cru deviner qu'il avait bu
4. Elle parlait, elle parlait .... Elle avait tout vu, elle avait été partout, elle avait tout essayé
5. Quand j'entrais, je vis qu'il avait pleuré. Je lui demandais ce qui s'était passé. Il me répondit qu'il avait dormi tout l'après midi
6. Je savais qu'il m'avait menti tout le temps. Je lui demandais combien de personnes il avait rencontrées ce jour-là
7. On m'en avait déjà parlé mais j'avais déjà oublié
8. Je me demandais s'il avait oublié sa promesse. Je savais qu'il la voyait depuis 2 mois
9. On m'apprit qu'il avait passé 2 ans en prison avant d'être relâché
10. On me dit qu'il avait commencé à écrire 2 ans auparavant
11. Je lui demandais si elle avait fini. Elle ne répondit pas. Apparemment elle n'avait pas entendu ce que j'avais dit.
12. je savais qu'il vivait avec eux depuis 2 mois
13. Je me demandais depuis combien de temps il travaillait pour elle
14. Je ne pouvais comprendre pourquoi il avait vendu cette maison
15. Je savais qu'elle avait été achetée par son frère
16. Quand j'entrai je sus qu'il avait parlé de moi
1. He noticed that he had been commiting an error but it was too late
2. She had been seeing him before, but she was ignoring that he was a member of the band
3. When I called him, I thought I was guessing that he had been drinking
4. She was speaking, she was speaking ... She saw everything, she was everywhere, she was trying everything
5. When I went in , I saw that he had been crying. I asked to him what's going on. He was replying to me that he had been sleeping all the afternnon
6. I knew that he had been lying everytime. I asked to him
7. People had speak to me but I have already forgotten
8. I asked to him if he had forgotten his promise. I knew that he had been seeing her for 2 months
9. They learned to me that he had been in jail for 2 years before to be relaxed
10. People said to me that he was beginning to write 2 years before
11. I asked to him if she had finished. She is replying to me "No" apparently, she hadn't seen that I had been teeling
12. I knew that he had been living with them for 2 months
13. I requested how many time did he work with her
14. I couldn't reply why he had been selling this house
15. I knew that she had bought by her brother
16. When I went in , I knew that he had been speaking about me
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Modifié par lucile83 le 21-08-2011 08:47
Réponse: Traduction/Correction de notrepere, postée le 21-08-2011 à 00:18:39 (S | E)
Hello1. He noticed that he had been (1) commiting an error (2) = faire une faute but it was too late.
2. She had been seeing (1) him before, but she was ignoring (1) that he was a member of the band
3. When I called him, I thought I was guessing (3) that he had been drinking
4. ... She saw (1) everything, she was (1) everywhere, she was trying (1) everything.
5. When I went in , I saw that he had been (1) crying. I asked to him what's going on = se passer = to happen. He was replying (2) to me that he had been sleeping (1) all the afternoon
6. I knew that he had been (1) tout le temps = toujours lying (il faut traduire le m'). I asked to him
7. He/She/They had already spoken to me about it but I had already forgotten.
8. I asked to him (non, se demander = to ask oneself/to wonder)
(1) temps à revoir
(2) verbe/traduction
(3) expression n'a pas de sens
en rouge = mots superflus
en vert = un cadeau
Réponse: Traduction/Correction de yaonee, postée le 21-08-2011 à 02:03:20 (S | E)
Je vais essayer de corriger les verbes qui n'ont pas eu le bon temps dans les 8 premières phrases
1. He noticed that he made mistaked .....
2. had seen him - she ignored
3. I thought sussing (j'ai cru deviner)
4. She had seen - had been - had been trying
5. was crying - I asked him what's happening - he replied me ... he had slept all afternoon
6. he always was lying to me
8. I'm wondering if he had forgotten his promise. (le reste de la phrase est correct)
Voilà
Réponse: Traduction/Correction de notrepere, postée le 22-08-2011 à 01:17:26 (S | E)
Hello part two1. He noticed that he had made a mistake
2. OK
3. Je dirais: I guessed
4. She had seen - had been - had tried
5. was crying - I asked him what had happened - he told me ... he had slept all afternoon
6. he was always lying to me
8. I'm wondering (temps à revoir)
9. They learned to me that he had been in jail for 2 years before to be relaxed
10. People
11. I asked to him if she had finished. She is replying to me "No". Apparently, she hadn't seen that I had been teeling
12. OK
13. I requested how many time did he work with her
14. I couldn't reply why he had been selling this house
15. I knew that she had [mot manquant - voix passive] bought by her brother
16. When I went in , I knew that he had been
En bleu = à revoir
En rouge = à supprime
Réponse: Traduction/Correction de yaonee, postée le 24-08-2011 à 20:12:40 (S | E)
Bonjour,
J'apporte les corrections, s'il y a des choses à modifier
pouvez-vous mettre les réponses directement
Merci, je pense que ces corrections sont exactes.
6. How many people did he meet this day (c'est la fin de la phrase)
8. I asked myself (je pense que c'est bon)
9. People told me that he had been in jail for 2 years before to be free
10. People told me that he began to write 2 years before
11. I asked him if she had finished. She said nothing. apparently, she hadn't see that I had said
13. I asked myself how long did he work with her?
14. I couldn't understand why he had sold this house
15. I knew that she had been bought by her brother
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Modifié par yaonee le 24-08-2011 20:12
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-08-2011 20:53
Réponse: Traduction/Correction de notrepere, postée le 24-08-2011 à 22:48:28 (S | E)
Hello On arrive pas à pas6. How many people did he meet this day Past Perfect is better / that instead of this
8. OK
9. avant d'être = before being relâcher = to set free / to release (notez bien le temps du verbe)
10. Il me semble que le Past Perfect vaut mieux
11. I asked him if she had finished. She said nothing. apparently, she hadn't see (see = voir) that I had said.
13. I asked myself how long did he work (temps) with her?
14. OK
15. I knew that she
had been bought by her brother. C'est ma voiture. Elle (= ma voiture) était achetée par mon frère.
She = une personne
It = une chose
I knew that it had been bought by his/her brother. (passive)
I knew that his/her brother had bought it. (active)
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Modifié par notrepere le 25-08-2011 06:54
Réponse: Traduction/Correction de yaonee, postée le 25-08-2011 à 16:02:47 (S | E)
Je corrige les dernières phrases
Je pense que c'est bon, mais si il y a des choses à corriger, mettez les réponses s'il vous plait
6. I knew that he was always lying to me everytime. I asked him how many people has he met that day
9. People told me that he had been in jail for 2 years before being released
10. People told me that he hasbegun to write 2 years before
11. I asked him if she had finished. She said nothing. apparently, she hadn't heard that I had said
13. I asked myself how long has he been working with her?
15. I knew that it had been bought by her brothe
Réponse: Traduction/Correction de notrepere, postée le 25-08-2011 à 17:21:04 (S | E)
HelloJe me suis trompé => 6. I knew that he was always lying to me
9. OK
10. People told me that he had begun to write 2 years before.
11. I asked him/her if she had finished. (I think it makes more sense to translate "lui" as "her") She said nothing. Apparently, she hadn't heard what I had said.
13. I asked myself how long he had been working with her?
15. OK
Cordialement
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