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Essai/ are all lies bad?
Message de cindy010 posté le 17-09-2011 à 00:10:25 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
voilà j'ai fait une rédaction et je voudrais que vous jetiez un petit coup d'œil si possible ^^ le sujet était :"Do you think that all lies are bad?"
ma rédaction :
I don't think that all lies are bad. For example if you lie to a member of your family about a present you didn't like it's not bad. It's just a white lie that is to say a small lie to make someone feel good.
Lying about your qualifications to get a job is useless because we will see that you lied and you will dismiss. Then it must say directly the truth.
However if you lie about your age to buy alcohol or drug it is already graver because you don't respect the law. And it is fatal for your health.
Lying to your partner about another person is dangerous because if your partner learns the truth you will lose his trust.
It's also bad to lie to her relatives about these points because they have to know for you help.
Merci déjà de m'avoir lu et d'avance pour vos réponses ^^
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-09-2011 08:15titre
Message de cindy010 posté le 17-09-2011 à 00:10:25 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
voilà j'ai fait une rédaction et je voudrais que vous jetiez un petit coup d'œil si possible ^^ le sujet était :"Do you think that all lies are bad?"
ma rédaction :
I don't think that all lies are bad. For example if you lie to a member of your family about a present you didn't like it's not bad. It's just a white lie that is to say a small lie to make someone feel good.
Lying about your qualifications to get a job is useless because we will see that you lied and you will dismiss. Then it must say directly the truth.
However if you lie about your age to buy alcohol or drug it is already graver because you don't respect the law. And it is fatal for your health.
Lying to your partner about another person is dangerous because if your partner learns the truth you will lose his trust.
It's also bad to lie to her relatives about these points because they have to know for you help.
Merci déjà de m'avoir lu et d'avance pour vos réponses ^^
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-09-2011 08:15titre
Réponse: Essai/ are all lies bad? de brettdallen, postée le 17-09-2011 à 00:52:02 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
Je vous propose quelques commentaires...
I don't think that all lies are bad. For example if you lie to a member of your family about a present you didn't like (,) it's not bad. It's just a white lie( , ) that is to say a small lie to make someone feel good.
Lying about your qualifications to get a job is useless because we ("We" ne va pas, et vous devriez préciser: qui?) will see that you lied and you will dismiss(à mettre au passif). Then it(choisissez un sujet logique) must("should" est moins injonctif) say directly(à placer ailleurs) the truth.
However( , ) if you lie about your age to buy alcohol or drug( , ) it is already graver(vocabulaire) because you don't respect the law. And it is fatal for your health(Vous parlez du mensonge, pas de la consommation d'alcool).
Lying to your partner about another person(pourquoi ce choix anecdotique? Le mensonge peut porter sur tout et n'importe quoi) is dangerous because if your partner learns the truth you will lose his/her trust.
It's also bad to lie to her(autre possessif) relatives about these points because they have to know for you help(je comprends, mais ce n'est pas clairement exprimé).
Amicalement.
Réponse: Essai/ are all lies bad? de cindy010, postée le 17-09-2011 à 23:22:06 (S | E)
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