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Message de twoyear posté le 16-10-2011 à 18:02:35 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'aimerais avoir de l'aide pour corriger mon expression car je sais que j'ai fait des fautes car je ne suis pas bien forte en anglais mais je n'arrive pas à les voir.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide, et voilà mon expression:
I will first start with the local news: At Nimes in a university with 478 students registered in first year, the sector experiencing a boom in psychology unprecedented and unexpected. It is an explosion in the first year that we can not explain. As a result, the University of Nimes had to make some adjustments. At the end of last week, students in psychology, led by representatives of the union UNEF, expressed their anger, denouncing an auditorium with 200 seats while they are more than 400 students. Do not be good at mental arithmetic to realize that it does not fit! The 200-seat amphitheater is on the site of the “Carmes”. Three weeks after the new school year, students asked to move the classes in an auditorium at Vauban which is most larger. Now all students can study, they are on the site of Vauban.
For national news I will talk about Lotto: It’s an mysterious absence because one person win at the LOTO and will not seek his earnings of 8 millions euros. It’s on the 13th August that the unknown won the jackpot, but two months later she is still unknown. The mystery could have been a millionaire has not contacted the customer relationship from the Française des jeux, so the gain is given in.The same scenario could be repeated for the player who won 162 million euros at Euro Millions on the 13th September.
Finally, for international news, I could talk about the death of Steve Jobs, but no! I prefer to talk about socks because according to a study by the company Blacksocks last Tuesday when talking about socks, it is easier to find a German or a British wearing clean socks compared to a French or Swiss. This study, which examined the clothing behavior of 3,000 peoples in six European countries, shows that 78% of Germans and British change their socks every day. The percentage of Swiss was 70% and 66% of the French. Finally, 77% of men and women questioned said change socks every day and 11% every 2 days. 4% change every 3 days and 1% once a week. The Germans have an average of 24 pairs of socks, 23 pairs the Austrians, the Swiss 22 pairs, and the French 17 pairs. And you how did you pair of socks?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-10-2011 18:19
Message de twoyear posté le 16-10-2011 à 18:02:35 (S | E | F)
Bonsoir,
j'aimerais avoir de l'aide pour corriger mon expression car je sais que j'ai fait des fautes car je ne suis pas bien forte en anglais mais je n'arrive pas à les voir.
Merci d'avance pour votre aide, et voilà mon expression:
I will first start with the local news: At Nimes in a university with 478 students registered in first year, the sector experiencing a boom in psychology unprecedented and unexpected. It is an explosion in the first year that we can not explain. As a result, the University of Nimes had to make some adjustments. At the end of last week, students in psychology, led by representatives of the union UNEF, expressed their anger, denouncing an auditorium with 200 seats while they are more than 400 students. Do not be good at mental arithmetic to realize that it does not fit! The 200-seat amphitheater is on the site of the “Carmes”. Three weeks after the new school year, students asked to move the classes in an auditorium at Vauban which is most larger. Now all students can study, they are on the site of Vauban.
For national news I will talk about Lotto: It’s an mysterious absence because one person win at the LOTO and will not seek his earnings of 8 millions euros. It’s on the 13th August that the unknown won the jackpot, but two months later she is still unknown. The mystery could have been a millionaire has not contacted the customer relationship from the Française des jeux, so the gain is given in.The same scenario could be repeated for the player who won 162 million euros at Euro Millions on the 13th September.
Finally, for international news, I could talk about the death of Steve Jobs, but no! I prefer to talk about socks because according to a study by the company Blacksocks last Tuesday when talking about socks, it is easier to find a German or a British wearing clean socks compared to a French or Swiss. This study, which examined the clothing behavior of 3,000 peoples in six European countries, shows that 78% of Germans and British change their socks every day. The percentage of Swiss was 70% and 66% of the French. Finally, 77% of men and women questioned said change socks every day and 11% every 2 days. 4% change every 3 days and 1% once a week. The Germans have an average of 24 pairs of socks, 23 pairs the Austrians, the Swiss 22 pairs, and the French 17 pairs. And you how did you pair of socks?
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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-10-2011 18:19
Réponse: Correction/University de lucile83, postée le 16-10-2011 à 21:59:31 (S | E)
Hello,
Avez-vous utilisé un traducteur en ligne?
Réponse: Correction/University de twoyear, postée le 17-10-2011 à 18:30:20 (S | E)
Hello,
Non je n'ai pas utilisé de traducteur en ligne, je connais leur réputation de médiocre...
Ma professeur de l'année dernière croyait aussi que j'utilisais un traducteur et pourtant je ne l'ai jamais fait.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 17-10-2011 18:33
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