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Correction/Trip to India
Message de zeka posté le 26-12-2011 à 23:47:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai besoin de votre aide pour corriger ce devoir que je viens de réaliser. Je ne suis absolument pas forte en anglais, je fais de nombreuses fautes autant dans la construction des phrases que dans le vocabulaire et c'est pour cela que j'aimerais que ceux qui voient ces erreurs me le signalent, même si elles ne sont à priori que peu importantes.
Merci d'avance. (Pour le contexte, c'est une jeune fille qui écrit à ses parents pour leur donner des nouvelles et leur dire ce qu'elle pense de son voyage dans son pays natal).
Dear mum and dad,
My trip was well and nice even if it was so long. You know I have never traveled. I must try again because I like it.
When I was arrived, my aut and my oncle were here. They wait for me. They are so well with contrary to what you had said to me.
India is very nice. I feel at home (contrary to when I am in Irish). I have already visited the famous "Taj Mahal". Wow, It is he most beautiful place I have never seen ! Also I saw the "Umaid Bhawan".
You know... I think I will be living here. I am 21 years-old now you know, I have maturity. I am really sorry. You may be worred about me when you will read this letter but it is my descision and I never changed my way. They are my root, I can't reign it.
Nevermind, I will continu sinding letters. I hope you will forgive me, and you will understand. I beg. I would be so happy if you could come. I love you. Trust me.
All my love.
PS : My aut, my oncle and me have done a picture. It is in the envelope. See this, I am happy with them. But I could be even happier here with you.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-12-2011 06:55
Message de zeka posté le 26-12-2011 à 23:47:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai besoin de votre aide pour corriger ce devoir que je viens de réaliser. Je ne suis absolument pas forte en anglais, je fais de nombreuses fautes autant dans la construction des phrases que dans le vocabulaire et c'est pour cela que j'aimerais que ceux qui voient ces erreurs me le signalent, même si elles ne sont à priori que peu importantes.
Merci d'avance. (Pour le contexte, c'est une jeune fille qui écrit à ses parents pour leur donner des nouvelles et leur dire ce qu'elle pense de son voyage dans son pays natal).
Dear mum and dad,
My trip was well and nice even if it was so long. You know I have never traveled. I must try again because I like it.
When I was arrived, my aut and my oncle were here. They wait for me. They are so well with contrary to what you had said to me.
India is very nice. I feel at home (contrary to when I am in Irish). I have already visited the famous "Taj Mahal". Wow, It is he most beautiful place I have never seen ! Also I saw the "Umaid Bhawan".
You know... I think I will be living here. I am 21 years-old now you know, I have maturity. I am really sorry. You may be worred about me when you will read this letter but it is my descision and I never changed my way. They are my root, I can't reign it.
Nevermind, I will continu sinding letters. I hope you will forgive me, and you will understand. I beg. I would be so happy if you could come. I love you. Trust me.
All my love.
PS : My aut, my oncle and me have done a picture. It is in the envelope. See this, I am happy with them. But I could be even happier here with you.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-12-2011 06:55
Réponse: Correction/Trip to India de dsmith, postée le 27-12-2011 à 01:13:31 (S | E)
Hello!
You have written a nice text. Congratulations.
Here are a few corrections:
These words are misspelled:
oncle
worred
aut
It is he most... he is misspelled.
continu
sinding
Good luck!
Douglas
Réponse: Correction/Trip to India de sherry48, postée le 27-12-2011 à 01:29:00 (S | E)
Hello zeka.
I am indicating just some verbs that you should take another look at.
When I was arrived, my aunt and my oncle were here. They wait for me. You know... I think I will be living here. You may be worried about me when you will read this letter but it is my decision and I never changed my way.
Bonne continuation.
Sherry
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Modifié par lucile83 le 27-12-2011 06:58
Réponse: Correction/Trip to India de zeka, postée le 27-12-2011 à 10:44:11 (S | E)
Thank you very much !
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