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Flower of life/essay
Message de bem2012 posté le 03-01-2012 à 23:15:07 (S | E | F)
Hello !
Could anyone help me to correct the mistakes that Idid made in the interview , please ?
Thank you indeed .
Your schoolmates have created an association because they want to live in a clean district.
Interview one of its members for your school magazine .
A : Hi Mr B ! How are you ?
B :Hi ! I'm ok , thank you .
A : So , we know that you 're a member on this association which is called " Flower of life " .
First of all , why did you choose this name ?
B : Humm ... As we know the flower is logically nice and has a good smelt , for this reason we chosed this name because we want our district to be clean and wonderful .
It is a nice name , isn't it ?
A : Hhhh of sure !
May you tell me the date that your association started on ?
B : " Flower of life " began on 10 / 06 / 2010
A : So , Mr B , what are the activities that you did or you're still doing ?
B : our main aim is to make the districts wonderful , so , we're working to clean them by choosing
a suite place to threw the rubbish and we tell the persons who live in this district about the danger that may result if they didn't take care of their second home ( I mean their distraction ).
A : Thank you a lot Ms B for these important information which will help me to do my school magazine .
B : You're welcome .
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Modifié par bem2012 le 03-01-2012 23:16
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-01-2012 23:44
Message de bem2012 posté le 03-01-2012 à 23:15:07 (S | E | F)
Hello !
Could anyone help me to correct the mistakes that I
Thank you indeed .
Your schoolmates have created an association because they want to live in a clean district.
Interview one of its members for your school magazine .
A : Hi Mr B ! How are you ?
B :Hi ! I'm ok , thank you .
A : So , we know that you 're a member on this association which is called " Flower of life " .
First of all , why did you choose this name ?
B : Humm ... As we know the flower is logically nice and has a good smelt , for this reason we chosed this name because we want our district to be clean and wonderful .
It is a nice name , isn't it ?
A : Hhhh of sure !
May you tell me the date that your association started on ?
B : " Flower of life " began on 10 / 06 / 2010
A : So , Mr B , what are the activities that you did or you're still doing ?
B : our main aim is to make the districts wonderful , so , we're working to clean them by choosing
a suite place to threw the rubbish and we tell the persons who live in this district about the danger that may result if they didn't take care of their second home ( I mean their distraction ).
A : Thank you a lot Ms B for these important information which will help me to do my school magazine .
B : You're welcome .
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Modifié par bem2012 le 03-01-2012 23:16
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-01-2012 23:44
Réponse: Flower of life/essay de gerondif, postée le 03-01-2012 à 23:39:54 (S | E)
Bonsoir,
rose: à corriger. vert: correction offerte. bleu: vocabulaire mal choisi
Your schoolmates have created an association because they want to live in a clean district.
Interview one of its members for your school magazine .
A : Hi Mr B ! How are you ?
B :Hi ! I'm ok , thank you .
A : So , we know that you 're a member on this association which is called " Flower of life " .
First of all , why did you choose this name ?
B : Humm ... As we(you?) know the flower is logically nice and has a good smelt , for this reason we chosed this name because we want our district to be clean and wonderful .
It is a nice name , isn't it ?
A : Hhhh of sure !
May you tell me the date that your association started on ?
B : " Flower of life " began on 10 / 06 / 2010 (prononcé comment?)
A : So , Mr B , what are the activities that you did or you're still doing ?
B : our main aim is to make the districts wonderful , so , we're working to clean them by choosing
a suite place to threw the rubbish and we tell the persons(people) who live in this district about the danger that may result if they didn't take care of their second home ( I mean their distraction ).
A : Thank you a lot (thanks a lot / thank you very much)Ms B for these(mot singulier à sens pluriel) important information which will help me to do my school magazine .
B : You're welcome .
Réponse: Flower of life/essay de bem2012, postée le 03-01-2012 à 23:46:50 (S | E)
Hello,
A : Hi Mr B ! How are you ?
B :Hi ! I'm ok , thank you .
A : So , we know that you 're a member on this association which is called " Flower of life " .
First of all , why did you choose this name ?
B : Humm ... As we(you?) know the flower is logically nice and has a good smell , for this reason we chosed this name because we want our district to be clean and wonderful .
It is a nice name , isn't it ?
A : Hhhh of course ( or certainly ) !
Could you tell me the date ( we put no thing )your association started on ?
B : " Flower of life " began on the tenth of June 2010
A : So , Mr B , what are the activities that you did or you're still doing ?
B : our main aim is to make the districts wonderful , so , we're working to clean them by choosing
a suited place to threw ( I don't know ! ) the rubbish and we tell the people who live in this district about the danger that may result if they didn't take care of their second home ( I mean their distraction ).
A : thanks a lot Mr B for this(mot singulier à sens pluriel) important information which will help me to do my school magazine .
B : You're welcome .
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Modifié par bem2012 le 03-01-2012 23:48
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Modifié par lucile83 le 03-01-2012 23:51 Vous avez laissé des fautes!!
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Modifié par bem2012 le 03-01-2012 23:52
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Modifié par bem2012 le 03-01-2012 23:57
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Modifié par bem2012 le 03-01-2012 23:58
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Modifié par bem2012 le 04-01-2012 00:01
Réponse: Flower of life/essay de bem2012, postée le 03-01-2012 à 23:52:10 (S | E)
gerondifRéponse: Flower of life/essay de gerondif, postée le 04-01-2012 à 00:14:28 (S | E)
Well,
A : Hi Mr B ! How are you ?
B :Hi ! I'm ok , thank you .(signifie pour moi,je suis indemne // ça pourrait aller mieux)
A : So , we know that you 're a member on this association which is called " Flower of life " .
First of all , why did you choose this name ?
B : Humm ... As we(you?) know the flower is logically nice and has a good smell , for this reason we chosed this name because we want our district to be clean and wonderful .
It is a nice name , isn't it ?
A : Hhhh of course ( or certainly ) !
Could you tell me the date when your association started
B : " Flower of life " began on the tenth of June 2010 (ok)
A : So , Mr B , what are the activities that you did or you're still doing ?
B : our main aim is to make the districts wonderful , so , we're working to clean them by choosing
a suited(double cliquez sur "convenable") place to threw ( infinitif!!) the rubbish and we tell the people who live in this district about the danger that may result if they didn't (don't) take care of their second home ( I mean their distraction ).(sens? carelessness?)
A : thanks a lot Mr B for this(mot singulier à sens pluriel) important information which will help me to do my school magazine .
B : You're welcome .
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