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Message de kouket3 posté le 31-01-2012 à 18:03:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je dois effectuer un stage pour la fin de l'année, je suis en licence 3.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ma lettre ?
Ah et aussi je dois trouver un stage rémunéré, ici en France c'est environ 400 par mois,
j'ai entendu dire qu'en Angleterre ce n'était pas courant de rémunérer les stagiaires.
Alors si vous avez une idée decomment la façon dont je peux glisser ça dans la lettre sans faire du forcing ce serait super !
Merci d'avance ! ;)
Dear Sir
Re: intership
For my diploma in marketing and sales, it is essential to have work experience.
I am hoping to work for an international firm in England, because I would like discover an other culture and a different view of marketing and labor work in England.
Moreover, a placement in your firm would enable me to perfect my English.
I was following a two-year course and training in fields of mangement, business (sales, B2B trade...) and marketing. Now, I'm studing in a business school, IAE xxx. A three-month experience period is a compulsary part of my course, from May to July 2012.
I am organized and I adapt easily. I am very motivated to learn and develop my skills.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm.
Yours faithfully
PS: Please find enclosed my Curriculum Vitae.
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Modifié par kouket3 le 31-01-2012 18:04
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-01-2012 18:54
Message de kouket3 posté le 31-01-2012 à 18:03:48 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je dois effectuer un stage pour la fin de l'année, je suis en licence 3.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger ma lettre ?
Ah et aussi je dois trouver un stage rémunéré, ici en France c'est environ 400 par mois,
j'ai entendu dire qu'en Angleterre ce n'était pas courant de rémunérer les stagiaires.
Alors si vous avez une idée de
Merci d'avance ! ;)
Dear Sir
Re: intership
For my diploma in marketing and sales, it is essential to have work experience.
I am hoping to work for an international firm in England, because I would like discover an other culture and a different view of marketing and labor work in England.
Moreover, a placement in your firm would enable me to perfect my English.
I was following a two-year course and training in fields of mangement, business (sales, B2B trade...) and marketing. Now, I'm studing in a business school, IAE xxx. A three-month experience period is a compulsary part of my course, from May to July 2012.
I am organized and I adapt easily. I am very motivated to learn and develop my skills.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm.
Yours faithfully
PS: Please find enclosed my Curriculum Vitae.
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Modifié par kouket3 le 31-01-2012 18:04
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Modifié par lucile83 le 31-01-2012 18:54
Réponse: Lettre motivation/stage de sherry48, postée le 01-02-2012 à 04:11:57 (S | E)
Hello kouket3.
You don't have a lot of errors, but you can make some changes.
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Dear Sir
Re: intership
For my diploma in marketing and sales, it is essential to have work experience.
I am hoping to work for an international firm in England, because I would like discover (infinitive) an other culture and a different view of marketing and labor work in England.
Moreover, a placement in your firm would enable me to perfect my English.
I was following a two-year course and training in * fields of mangement, business (sales, B2B trade...) and marketing. Now, I'm studing in a business school, IAE Lille. A three-month experience period is a compulsary part of my course, from May to July 2012.
I am organized and I adapt easily. I am very motivated to learn and develop my skills.
I would be very grateful if you would agree to give me a placement in your firm.
Yours faithfully
PS: Please find enclosed my Curriculum Vitae. (A different order is often used.)
Sherry
Réponse: Lettre motivation/stage de kouket3, postée le 02-02-2012 à 08:57:45 (S | E)
Thanks a lot Sherry ! =)
I have another question, can I write : "A two to three-month experience period ? "
Réponse: Lettre motivation/stage de sherry48, postée le 02-02-2012 à 23:00:26 (S | E)
Hello kouket3.
'Experience period' sounds a little bizarre. Where were you thinking of adding it? Sherry
Réponse: Lettre motivation/stage de kouket3, postée le 06-02-2012 à 15:11:50 (S | E)
Hello Sherry,
I would like to say "the time for the placement, it's between 2 or 3 months, I don't know yet.
Réponse: Lettre motivation/stage de mwren, postée le 06-02-2012 à 17:43:53 (S | E)
Hello,
you could say " I am looking for work experience for a period of two to three months "
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Modifié par lucile83 le 06-02-2012 17:53
Réponse: Lettre motivation/stage de sherry48, postée le 07-02-2012 à 01:07:40 (S | E)
Hello kouket3. I think mwren's suggestion is better. Sherry
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