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Message de laura60400 posté le 17-03-2012 à 18:33:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici l'expression que j'ai faite ; je pense qu'il doit y avoir quelques fautes.
Merci d'avance à tous ceux qui essayeron(s)t de m'aider
"Last week it was “Le bal des enfoirés”. Every year they make an outstanding success in order to find funds for the restaurants of the heart and that's why I wanted you to present a graph representing the number of meals that the restaurants of heart offer since 1985 to make you understand the essential role they hold before this poverty that continues to grow since these last years.
From 1985 to 1987, the number of meals distributed was approximately 15 million per year.
From 1987 to 1993, the restaurants of heart served between 21 to 25 million meals a year.
From 1993 to 1994, 28 million meals have were distributed.
From 1994 to 1996, 50 million meals per year were served by the restaurants of the heart.
From 1996 to 2004, the number of meals distributed was approximately 60 million per year and finally from 2005 to 2010, the number of meals has greatly advanced. In 2010, 100 million meals were distributed.
There is an increasing curve in the number of meals distributed by the restaurants of heart. Indeed from 1985 to 2010 the number of meals has been multiplied by 6.6."
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Modifié par willy le 17-03-2012 21:14
Message de laura60400 posté le 17-03-2012 à 18:33:10 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Voici l'expression que j'ai faite ; je pense qu'il doit y avoir quelques fautes.
Merci d'avance à tous ceux qui essayeron(s)t de m'aider
"Last week it was “Le bal des enfoirés”. Every year they make an outstanding success in order to find funds for the restaurants of the heart and that's why I wanted you to present a graph representing the number of meals that the restaurants of heart offer since 1985 to make you understand the essential role they hold before this poverty that continues to grow since these last years.
From 1985 to 1987, the number of meals distributed was approximately 15 million per year.
From 1987 to 1993, the restaurants of heart served between 21 to 25 million meals a year.
From 1993 to 1994, 28 million meals have were distributed.
From 1994 to 1996, 50 million meals per year were served by the restaurants of the heart.
From 1996 to 2004, the number of meals distributed was approximately 60 million per year and finally from 2005 to 2010, the number of meals has greatly advanced. In 2010, 100 million meals were distributed.
There is an increasing curve in the number of meals distributed by the restaurants of heart. Indeed from 1985 to 2010 the number of meals has been multiplied by 6.6."
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Modifié par willy le 17-03-2012 21:14
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