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Message de vanime posté le 19-05-2012 à 20:54:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde.
Je suis en seconde et je vais avoir un oral mardi où l'on doit en quelque sorte raconter un peu notre vie.
J'ai préparé un petit texte et je me demandais s'il y avait beaucoup de fautes, ça ferait un peu tâche si il je serais ennuyée s'il y en avait,surtout pour un oral.
Voilà mon texte, n'hésitez pas à me dire si quelque chose est mal dit ou autre.
Merci d'avance
Hello, my name is xxxxxxxxxxx, i'm sixteen years old, I've lived in xxxxxx since my birth
My hobbies are mangas and movies.
I've got one brother and one sister.
My brother is twenty three and works as joiner.
I find this a fascinating job because with the wood we can make many things like furnitures,kitchenwares or else.
My sister is twenty one and works in catering as waitress, this job seems very tired but she loves it.
Later, I would like to be doctor, I've always wanted to help people since I was little, so I think I could help much people by practicing this job.
After my studies, I would like to go and live in U.S.A, I love this country.
Besides, I went to New York two years ago with a summer camp and it was amazing, everything is big over there, I visited many buildings and monuments like Empire State Building and Statue of Liberty. Even if my parents were a little bit scared because at the end of the travelling, as the group of teenagers was slit in half, one of a group missed the plane and the organizers had called my parents to say them I had missed my plane, so they were very worried but I reassured them with a phone call by saying them it wasn't my group.
I think, I said the main thing (J'ai voulu dire "J'ai dit le principal", je ne sais pas vraiment si ça se dit comme cela)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-05-2012 22:35
Message de vanime posté le 19-05-2012 à 20:54:53 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde.
Je suis en seconde et je vais avoir un oral mardi où l'on doit en quelque sorte raconter un peu notre vie.
J'ai préparé un petit texte et je me demandais s'il y avait beaucoup de fautes, ça ferait un peu tâche si il je serais ennuyée s'il y en avait,surtout pour un oral.
Voilà mon texte, n'hésitez pas à me dire si quelque chose est mal dit ou autre.
Merci d'avance
Hello, my name is xxxxxxxxxxx, i'm sixteen years old, I've lived in xxxxxx since my birth
My hobbies are mangas and movies.
I've got one brother and one sister.
My brother is twenty three and works as joiner.
I find this a fascinating job because with the wood we can make many things like furnitures,kitchenwares or else.
My sister is twenty one and works in catering as waitress, this job seems very tired but she loves it.
Later, I would like to be doctor, I've always wanted to help people since I was little, so I think I could help much people by practicing this job.
After my studies, I would like to go and live in U.S.A, I love this country.
Besides, I went to New York two years ago with a summer camp and it was amazing, everything is big over there, I visited many buildings and monuments like Empire State Building and Statue of Liberty. Even if my parents were a little bit scared because at the end of the travelling, as the group of teenagers was slit in half, one of a group missed the plane and the organizers had called my parents to say them I had missed my plane, so they were very worried but I reassured them with a phone call by saying them it wasn't my group.
I think, I said the main thing (J'ai voulu dire "J'ai dit le principal", je ne sais pas vraiment si ça se dit comme cela)
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Modifié par lucile83 le 19-05-2012 22:35
Réponse: Correction/Oral de sherry48, postée le 20-05-2012 à 00:09:28 (S | E)
Hello.
Since this is oral, I did not look at spelling or punctuation.
My brother is twenty three and works as __ joiner.
I find this a fascinating job because with the wood we can make many things like furnitures,kitchenwares or else.
My sister is twenty one and works in catering as __ waitress, this job seems very tired but she loves it.
Later, I would like to be __ doctor, I've always wanted to help people since I was little, so I think I could help much people by practicing this job.
After my studies, I would like to go and live in __ U.S.A, I love this country.
Besides, I went to New York two years ago with (Is this the correct preposition?) a summer camp and it was amazing, everything is big over there, I visited many buildings and monuments like __ Empire State Building and Statue of Liberty. Even if my parents were a little bit scared because at the end of the travelling, as the group of teenagers was slit in half, one of a group missed the plane and the organizers had called my parents to say them I had missed my plane.
That's all for now.
Sherry
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