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Message de lauura13 posté le 26-05-2012 à 17:37:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je dois écrire les différences et les points communs entre l'Ouest et l'Est américain pendant la conquête de l'Ouest.Pourriez-vous les corriger s'il vous plaît?
xxx
Merci d'avance.
In the West,lands were more expensive than the East.
In the West,pioneers looked for gold.
In the West and the Est,were next to ocean.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-05-2012 18:52
Ce que vous écrivez sera corrigé, rien d'autre.
Message de lauura13 posté le 26-05-2012 à 17:37:07 (S | E | F)
Bonjour
je dois écrire les différences et les points communs entre l'Ouest et l'Est américain pendant la conquête de l'Ouest.Pourriez-vous les corriger s'il vous plaît?
xxx
Merci d'avance.
In the West,lands were more expensive than the East.
In the West,pioneers looked for gold.
In the West and the Est,were next to ocean.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-05-2012 18:52
Ce que vous écrivez sera corrigé, rien d'autre.
Réponse: Correction/USA de bluestar, postée le 26-05-2012 à 19:13:23 (S | E)
Bonjour,
In (1) in this sense "land" is usually referred to in the singular, "land was.." not "lands were..."
(2) is Ok
In (3) "Est" should be "East" and there is no subject.
Réponse: Correction/USA de lauura13, postée le 27-05-2012 à 11:45:41 (S | E)
A ok ,Thanks.Have you got ideas?
In the West,land was more expensive than the East.
In the West,pioneers looked for gold.
In the West and the East,were next to ocean.
It's ok?
Réponse: Correction/USA de dolfine56, postée le 27-05-2012 à 11:53:12 (S | E)
Hello,
In the West and the East,were next to ocean
this sentence is not right.
-You don't need "in the"
-Why did you use 'were"? I guess West and East are still next to the ocean!.
It's up to you....
Réponse: Correction/USA de lauura13, postée le 27-05-2012 à 11:57:06 (S | E)
Right for ocean! I'm stupid.
West,land was more expensive than the East.
West,pioneers looked for gold.
West and the East,are next to ocean.
It is ok?
Réponse: Correction/USA de bluestar, postée le 27-05-2012 à 13:56:20 (S | E)
Hello,
I think dolfine meant that you don't need "in the" in the third sentence, but you do need it in the first two..
"In the West, land was more...etc".
"In the West, pioneers looked for gold"
The third sentence seems a little pointless, if you just want to say that there is an ocean on both sides of the United States. Is this what you want to say?
Réponse: Correction/USA de lauura13, postée le 27-05-2012 à 13:59:46 (S | E)
Ok.
So it is:
In the West,land was more expensive than the East.
In the West,pioneers looked for gold.
West and the East,are next to ocean.
Vous n'auriez pas une idée de point commun?
Réponse: Correction/USA de bluestar, postée le 27-05-2012 à 16:15:35 (S | E)
Hello,
OK, have it your way, but you need a few little changes:
"In the West, land was more expensive that in the East"
"The West and the East both adjoined the ocean"
Réponse: Correction/USA de notrepere, postée le 27-05-2012 à 17:27:14 (S | E)
Hello"In the West, land was more expensive than in the East"
Réponse: Correction/USA de bluestar, postée le 27-05-2012 à 19:08:57 (S | E)
Sorry for the careless mistake...
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