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Message de floflo27 posté le 23-08-2012 à 14:04:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît car je dois écrire un texte pour sensibiliser les jeunes aux problèmes que rencontrent les adolescents handicapés. Pourriez-vous corriger mon texte, et si vous en avez, me donner des idées.
Merci pour vos réponses.
The teen disabled meet a lot of problem. They have always somone with them to help of to monitor. they have difficulty moving like taking the bus ...
They can not leave the evening with their friends.
They find it hard to meet new person. They realize the eyes of others. they very rarely girlfriend, boyfriend.
They do not always dress fashionable, as they would like.
they do not always have the same activity as the teens like sport.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-08-2012 14:43
Message de floflo27 posté le 23-08-2012 à 14:04:26 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider s'il vous plaît car je dois écrire un texte pour sensibiliser les jeunes aux problèmes que rencontrent les adolescents handicapés. Pourriez-vous corriger mon texte, et si vous en avez, me donner des idées.
Merci pour vos réponses.
The teen disabled meet a lot of problem. They have always somone with them to help of to monitor. they have difficulty moving like taking the bus ...
They can not leave the evening with their friends.
They find it hard to meet new person. They realize the eyes of others. they very rarely girlfriend, boyfriend.
They do not always dress fashionable, as they would like.
they do not always have the same activity as the teens like sport.
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Modifié par lucile83 le 23-08-2012 14:43
Réponse: Correction / texte de sherry48, postée le 23-08-2012 à 14:38:38 (S | E)
Hello.
Check spelling, word order, and whether it should be singular or plural.
The teen disabled meet
a lot of problem . They have always somone with them to help . they have difficulty moving ______like taking the bus ... They can not leave (different definition-check the dictionary) the evening with their friends.
They find it hard to meet new person
. They realize the eyes of others. they very rarely _______ ___ girlfriend___ boyfriend. They do not always dress fashionable, as they would like.
they do not always have the same activity as the (autres?) teens like sport_.
Sherry
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