Présentation /correction

Présentation /correction
Message de callmedaddy posté le 16-09-2012 à 18:39:21 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,

Voilà un sujet de présentation que je dois faire.Je suis mauvais en anglais,et si vous pouviez me corriger, ça m'aiderait grandement.
Merci pour votre aide.

Hello

I m Nicolas, i m twenty-three, i've one litlle sister, two little half sisters and two little half brothers.
I practice kite-surfing, but i broke my foot during a session. this sport is very attractive but dangerous.
More late, i would become engineer, because it a great job and for get lot of monney.
For me travel is so great, for know other culture, and meet people. i went to london, venice, spain at port aventura, paris, belgium, algeria and that all i think.
London is an awesome city, young people want make party evrytime, and museum are really interesting, i visited natural history museum, victoria and albert museum, i saw picadily circus and queen marry garden. it was very nice and beautifull.
i m sociable, a hard worker and and authoritarian, i like discuss for exchanging our opinions and debates.
If i must change anything in my last five years that was my broken foot, i lost 4 months, and it was so hard to catch up a good level for my study.
the people say about me that i m perfect, so awesome, i m the best friend forever and mainly humble.
ok thank you for listen me i know that it was easy to listen a man like me.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 16-09-2012 21:17

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Réponse: Présentation /correction de komiks, postée le 16-09-2012 à 19:01:49 (S | E)
Hello,
Je vais essayer de corriger les erreurs qui sont à ma portée. Si j'en oublie, d'autres membres vous corrigeront.
Votre texte comporte beaucoup de fautes. Il n'y a quasiment aucune majuscule.
Bon courage pour la correction.
Je remercie d'avance les membres qui corrigeront les erreurs restantes (il y en a sûrement)

I m apostrophe Nicolas, i m majuscule + apostrophe twenty-three, i've manque un petit mot one litlle orthographe sister, two little half sisters and two little half brothers.
I practice kite-surfing, but i majuscule broke my foot during a session. this majuscule sport is very attractive but dangerous.
More late "late" est un adjectif court ==> mauvais comparatif, i majuscule would like to become article engineer, because it manque le verbea great job and for get lot of monney. mal dit
For me travel is so great mal dit : "I love travelling" est mieux, for mauvaise préposition know other culture, and meet people. i majuscule went utiliser le present perfect to london, venice, spain at to port aventura, paris, belgium, algeria majuscules !! and that all i think.
London is an awesome city, young people want manque un petit motmake party evrytime dire autrement, and museum accord are really interesting. i majuscule visited present perfect natural history museum majuscules !!!, victoria and albert museum (majuscules !!), i majuscule saw je mettrais au present perfect picadily circus majuscules and queen marry garden majuscules. it majuscules was very nice and beautifull orthographe.
i m majuscule+apostrophe sociable, a hard worker mettre l'adjectif and and authoritarian. i majuscule like discuss forme en -ing for autre préposition exchanging our opinions and debates.
If i majusculemust mauvais temps change anything in my last five years that was my broken foot, i lost 4 months, and it was so hard to catch up a good level for my study. dire autrement, très mal dit
the people say about me that i m majuscule + apostrophe perfect, so awesome, i m the best friend forever and mainly humble.

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Réponse: Présentation /correction de lucile83, postée le 16-09-2012 à 21:27:34 (S | E)
Hello,

Quand vous aurez écrit votre texte avec les majuscules nécessaires, il sera alors possible de poursuivre la correction.

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