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Message de mlb95 posté le 10-10-2012 à 19:08:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
J'ai dû écrire ce texte en anglais en rapport avec un Cd que j'ai créé en rapport avec la Route 66. J'aimerais que quelqu'un y jette un coup d'oeil si possible ? Parce que mon niveau d'anglais n'est pas terrible... Je suis en Terminale en passant
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Voilà ce que j'ai écrit :
After listening each interpretation of Route 66, we have chosen the one which appeals us the most. : Depeche Mode's song. Because that's our favourite kind of music. Moreover, we know this group thanks to their other songs.
The noise which is provoked by electric guitares makes us think of bikers. And the nonchalance of Dave Gahan's voice, brings us an hysterical feeling.
To make the CD cover, we google some cult pictures such as the Cadillac Ranch and the neon lights. Furthermore, we put motels and gas station photographs on our poster. Then, we add the number "66" in the middle, and we fill each six with plates of every state acrossed by the highway. Behind the record sleeve, we have decided to place the slogan "Get your kicks on route 66" over a picture of the road. And on the CD, we can see heads of the four members of the band.
We found that all these ideas remind us of the song which is a tribute to the mother road.
If you ant to buy this CD, you can pay 13 pounds on this site : xxx
Voilà, j'espère que c'est tout de même assez clair... Merci d'avance pour votre aide et bonne soirée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-10-2012 20:23
Message de mlb95 posté le 10-10-2012 à 19:08:00 (S | E | F)
Bonjour !
J'ai dû écrire ce texte en anglais en rapport avec un Cd que j'ai créé en rapport avec la Route 66. J'aimerais que quelqu'un y jette un coup d'oeil si possible ? Parce que mon niveau d'anglais n'est pas terrible... Je suis en Terminale en passant
.Voilà ce que j'ai écrit :
After listening each interpretation of Route 66, we have chosen the one which appeals us the most. : Depeche Mode's song. Because that's our favourite kind of music. Moreover, we know this group thanks to their other songs.
The noise which is provoked by electric guitares makes us think of bikers. And the nonchalance of Dave Gahan's voice, brings us an hysterical feeling.
To make the CD cover, we google some cult pictures such as the Cadillac Ranch and the neon lights. Furthermore, we put motels and gas station photographs on our poster. Then, we add the number "66" in the middle, and we fill each six with plates of every state acrossed by the highway. Behind the record sleeve, we have decided to place the slogan "Get your kicks on route 66" over a picture of the road. And on the CD, we can see heads of the four members of the band.
We found that all these ideas remind us of the song which is a tribute to the mother road.
If you ant to buy this CD, you can pay 13 pounds on this site : xxx
Voilà, j'espère que c'est tout de même assez clair... Merci d'avance pour votre aide et bonne soirée!
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Modifié par lucile83 le 10-10-2012 20:23
Réponse: Correction /Route 66 de gerondif, postée le 10-10-2012 à 23:06:57 (S | E)
Hello,
Bien que vous n'ayez pas choisi LA version des "Rolling Stones", je vais néammoins regarder votre texte:
After listening to each interpretation of Route 66, we have chosen the one which appeals to us the most. : Depeche Mode's song. Because that's our favourite kind of music. Moreover, we know this group thanks to their other songs.
The noise which is provoked by electric guitares makes us think of(reminds us of) bikers. And the nonchalance of Dave Gahan's voice, brings us an hysterical feeling.(makes us hysterical)
To make the CD cover, we google(prétérit?) some cult pictures such as the Cadillac Ranch and the neon lights. Furthermore, we put motels and gas station photographs on our poster. Then, we add(prétérit?) the number "66" in the middle, and we fill(prétérit ?) each six with plates of every state acrossed(jamais vu ce verbe. Ca doit être moderne) by the highway. Behind(at the back of) the record sleeve, we have decided to place the slogan "Get your kicks on route 66" over a picture of the road. And on the CD, we can see the heads of the four members of the band.
We found that all these ideas remind us of the song which is a tribute to the mother road.
If you want to buy this CD, you can pay (please pay) 13 pounds on this site : xxx
Réponse: Correction /Route 66 de mlb95, postée le 10-10-2012 à 23:53:52 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup ! C'est vraiment gentil de votre part.
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