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Message de shooki posté le 28-11-2012 à 15:43:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai une rédaction à faire en anglais sur le sujet suivant : When do you think is the best time for a young adult to leave home ?
Est-ce-que vous pourriez me dire si j'ai fait des fautes s'il vous plait ?
Some people think eighteen years old is the right age to leave home but i guess it's not a question of years. It really depends on the person and of some other things.
First, we have to prepare ourselves of it. All of us say we can't wait (j'aurais préféré dire je me languis mais je ne sais pas comment)the day we will leave home, live our lives without being all the time monitored (surveillé ?) by our parents. But i think it's not really the truth. In fact, we live with our family for always, we love them and it's an important changing. So, first, we have to be sure we are morally prepared to leave home.
Then, there are in my opinion two best times for a young adult to leave home.
In one hand it can be after the high school. I consider even if we need a financial support (une aide financière ?) from our parents we don't have to hesitate to leave home to do the best studies because it's our future which is involved.
But not all of us do many studies.
So, in this case, i estimate the best moment to leave home is when we can support (subvenir ?) to our needs. To my mind, it has no sense (it doesn't make sense ?) to leave home to, after, ask money to our parents all the time.
So, to conclude, I think the best time to leave home is when we are morally ready to leave our family and that we can support (s'assumer ?) ourselves or to do the best studies even if we still need a financial assistance from our parents.
Merci d'avance !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2012 19:46
Message de shooki posté le 28-11-2012 à 15:43:17 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,J'ai une rédaction à faire en anglais sur le sujet suivant : When do you think is the best time for a young adult to leave home ?
Est-ce-que vous pourriez me dire si j'ai fait des fautes s'il vous plait ?
Some people think eighteen years old is the right age to leave home but i guess it's not a question of years. It really depends on the person and of some other things.
First, we have to prepare ourselves of it. All of us say we can't wait (j'aurais préféré dire je me languis mais je ne sais pas comment)the day we will leave home, live our lives without being all the time monitored (surveillé ?) by our parents. But i think it's not really the truth. In fact, we live with our family for always, we love them and it's an important changing. So, first, we have to be sure we are morally prepared to leave home.
Then, there are in my opinion two best times for a young adult to leave home.
In one hand it can be after the high school. I consider even if we need a financial support (une aide financière ?) from our parents we don't have to hesitate to leave home to do the best studies because it's our future which is involved.
But not all of us do many studies.
So, in this case, i estimate the best moment to leave home is when we can support (subvenir ?) to our needs. To my mind, it has no sense (it doesn't make sense ?) to leave home to, after, ask money to our parents all the time.
So, to conclude, I think the best time to leave home is when we are morally ready to leave our family and that we can support (s'assumer ?) ourselves or to do the best studies even if we still need a financial assistance from our parents.
Merci d'avance !
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Modifié par lucile83 le 28-11-2012 19:46
Réponse: Correction/quitter la maison de bluestar, postée le 29-11-2012 à 10:43:47 (S | E)
Bonjour..
Some people think eighteen years old is the right age to leave home but i(majuscule) guess it's not a question of years. It really depends on the person and of on some other things.
First, we have to prepare ourselves of for it. All of us say we can't wait for (j'aurais préféré dire je me languis mais je ne sais pas comment)the day we will leave home, and live our lives without being all the time monitored (surveillé ?) supervised by our parents. But i(majuscule) think it's not really the truth. In fact, we live with our family for always ('our families are always with us' serait mieux), we love them and it's an important a major changeing. So, first, we have to be sure we are morally prepared to leave home.
Then, there are in my opinion two best times for a young adult to leave home.
In On the one hand it can be after the high school. I consider even if we need a financial support (une aide financière ?) from our parents we don't should not have to hesitate to leave home to do the best studies because it's our future which is involved.
But not all of us do many studies.
So, in this case, i(majuscule) estimate the best moment to leave home is when we can support (subvenir ?) to ourselves needs. To my mind, it has makes no sense (it doesn't make sense ?) to leave home to and, afterwards, ask money to our parents for money all the time.
So, to conclude, I think the best time to leave home is when we are morally ready to leave our familiesy and that we can to support (s'assumer ?) ourselves or to do the best studies even if we still need a financial assistance from our parents.
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