Devoir /Reality TV

Devoir /Reality TV
Message de dexik posté le 08-01-2013 à 21:30:12 (S | E | F)
Bonjour

J'ai un devoir à rendre pour lundi et j'aimerais votre aide pour le corriger s'il vous plaît
Merci d'avance pour vos réponses.
How do you explain the success of reality TV programs over the world?

Foremost, TV reality represents simple people who often have a similar life of our. There’s a new dimension of the relation of the spectator with the program, frequently we don’t see perfect and sublime stars. They’re people of the day-to-day life, we could cross them on the corner of the street. It captivates us, everybody is a little bit curious, we want to know how other people live, what are their hobbits… We compare our life to their life. Tough, the candidates are immersed in a particular situation and they have to be the last on the game to win the price. It’s conflicting, as a matter of fact when we’re on a dangerous situation we have to approach other people and help each other, however they’re in a real competition and everyone want to win. Then, they’re ready to do everything: lies, tricks and treasons.
Also, the candidates are selected by the production and they try to take people very different to have conflicts. They always highlight the strengths and the weaknesses of each people. It’s very sly but that’s what spectators want to see. Sometimes, viewers can also vote for their favorite candidate, (se-faisant) they decide who leaves the game. As a matter of fact, the camera doesn’t show us the truth but a truth.

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Modifié par lucile83 le 08-01-2013 21:32
Les corrections se font sur ce que nous lisons, nous n'ajoutons rien.

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Réponse: Devoir /Reality TV de notrepere, postée le 08-01-2013 à 21:53:36 (S | E)
Hello

Foremost(1), TV reality(2) represents simple people who often have a similar life to our (3). There’s a new dimension to the relationship between (4) the spectator and the program, frequently we don’t see perfect and sublime stars. They’re everyday people; we could cross(6) them on the corner of the street. It captivates us, everybody is a little bit curious, we want to know how other people live, what are their hobbits (7)… We compare our life to their life. Tough, the candidates are immersed in a particular situation and they have to be the last on the game to win the price. It’s conflicting(8), as a matter of fact when we’re in a dangerous situation we have to approach other people and help each other, however they’re in a real competition and everyone wants to win. Then, they’re ready to do everything: lies, tricks and treasons.
Also, the candidates are selected by the production team and they try to pick people (qui + verbe) very different (pour + verbe = in order to + create / conflicts are 'created')to * conflicts. They always highlight the strengths and the weaknesses of each person. It’s very sly but that’s what spectators want to see. Sometimes, viewers can also vote for their favorite candidate, (se-faisant) they decide who leaves the game. As a matter of fact, the camera doesn’t show us the truth but a truth.

(1) Le mot 'foremost' peut être un adjectif ou un adverbe. Comme adverbe, il faut utiliser l'expression "First and foremost" dans ce contexte.
(2) ordre des mots
(3) pluriel
(4) between car on compare deux choses
(5) everyday
(6) ce verbe ne va pas
(7) ce qui sont leurs hobbits ou hobbys ? Il faut placer le verbe à la fin de la phrase.
(8) Ce mot ne va pas

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Réponse: Devoir /Reality TV de dexik, postée le 09-01-2013 à 21:40:39 (S | E)
Hello,

First and foremost, reality TV represents simple people who often have a similar life to ours. There’s a new dimension of the relationship between the spectator and the program, frequently we don’t see perfect and sublime stars. They’re everyday people, we could see them on the corner of the street. It captivates us, everybody is a little bit curious, we want to know how other people live, what are their hobbies… We compare our life to their life. Tough, the candidates are immersed in a particular situation and they have to be the last on the game to win the price. It’s contradictory, as a matter of fact when we’re on a dangerous situation we have to approach other people and help each other, however they’re in a real competition and everyone want to win. Then, they’re ready to do everything: lies, tricks and treasons.
Also, the candidates are selected by the production team and they try to pick people very different in order to create conflicts. In fact, the Human delights low blows and disputes and he always want to know the end of the story. Sometimes, viewers can also vote for their favourite candidate, so they decide who leaves the game and who stay. . They always highlight the strengths and the weaknesses of each person. It’s very sly but that’s what spectators want to see. As a matter of fact, the camera doesn’t show us the truth but a truth.

Merci encore de l'aide, j'ai rajouté une phrase dans le devoir pour l'allonger...

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Modifié par lucile83 le 09-01-2013 22:03

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Réponse: Devoir /Reality TV de dexik, postée le 09-01-2013 à 23:04:36 (S | E)
Petites rectifications :

First and foremost, reality TV represents simple people who often have a similar life to ours. There’s a new dimension of the relationship between the spectator and the program, frequently we don’t see perfect and sublime stars. They’re everyday people, we could see them on the corner of the street. It captivates us, everybody is a little bit curious, we want to know how other people live, what are their hobbies… We compare our life to their life. Although, the candidates are immersed in a particular situation and they have to be the last on the game to win the price. It’s conflicting, as a matter of fact when we’re in a dangerous situation we have to approach other people and help each other, however they’re in a real competition and everyone wants to win. Then, they’re ready to do everything: lies, tricks and treasons.
Also, the candidates are selected by the production team and they try to pick people very different in order to create conflicts. They always highlight the strengths and the weaknesses of each person. It’s very sly but that’s what spectators want to see. In fact, the Human delights low blows and disputes and he always want to know the end of the story. Sometimes, viewers can also vote for their favourite candidate, so they decide who leaves the game and who stay. As a matter of fact, the camera doesn’t show us the truth but a truth.

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Réponse: Devoir /Reality TV de notrepere, postée le 10-01-2013 à 01:40:36 (S | E)
Hello

First and foremost, reality TV represents simple people who often have a similar life to ours. There’s a new dimension of the relationship between the spectator and the program, frequently we don’t see perfect and sublime stars. They’re everyday people, we could see them on the corner of the street. It captivates us, everybody is a little bit curious, we want to know how other people live, what their hobbies are… We compare our life to their life. Although, The candidates are immersed in a particular situation and they have to be the last on the game to win the prize. It’s conflicting (1), as a matter of fact when we’re in a dangerous situation we have to approach other people and help each other, however they’re in a real competition and everyone wants to win. Then, they’re ready to do everything: lies, tricks and treasons.
Also, the candidates are selected by the production team and they try to pick people very different (ordre 2 3 1) in order to create conflicts. They always highlight the strengths and the weaknesses of each person. It’s very sly but that’s what spectators want to see. In fact, the Human delights humans enjoy low blows and disputes and they always want to know the end of the story. Sometimes, viewers can also vote for their favourite candidate, so they decide who leaves the game and who stays. As a matter of fact, the camera doesn’t show us the truth but a truth.

(1) Vous voulez dire: It creates conflict ou There is a conflict ou ??

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Réponse: Devoir /Reality TV de dexik, postée le 10-01-2013 à 21:45:39 (S | E)
First and foremost, reality TV represents simple people who often have a similar life to ours. There’s a new dimension of the relationship between the spectator and the program, frequently we don’t see perfect and sublime stars. They’re everyday people, we could see them on the corner of the street. It captivates us, everybody is a little bit curious, we want to know how other people live, what their hobbies are… We compare our life to their life. The candidates are immersed in a particular situation and they have to be the last on the game to win the prize. It’s conflicting (je veux dire " C'est contradictoire " mais je sais pas le dire ), as a matter of fact when we’re in a dangerous situation we have to approach other people and help each other, however they’re in a real competition and everyone wants to win. Then, they’re ready to do everything: lies, tricks and treasons.
Also, the candidates are selected by the production team and they try to pick very different people in order to create conflicts. They always highlight the strengths and the weaknesses of each person. It’s very sly but that’s what spectators want to see. In fact, humans enjoy low blows and disputes and they always want to know the end of the story. Sometimes, viewers can also vote for their favourite candidate, so they decide who leaves the game and who stays. As a matter of fact, the camera doesn’t show us the truth but a truth.

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Réponse: Devoir /Reality TV de lucile83, postée le 10-01-2013 à 21:54:13 (S | E)
Bonjour dexik,

Vous pouvez faire un double clic sur le mot clé et obtenir ainsi un dictionnaire en ligne qui vous donnera toutes les informations.
Cordialement.
Lien internet

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