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Message de caroliine91 posté le 12-01-2013 à 15:43:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai passé du temps à le refaire..
Merci de me corriger s'il vous plaît. Est-ce que cette fois c'est grammaticalement correct ?
Je vous remercie.
Firstly in this chapter Holden says there are things he cannot remember like when Stradlater is return from his date with Jane. He says he was so worried that he does not remember but it is more likely that he looked out by the window.Strendlater don't say a word about his date but resquest immediately if Holden made his dissertation. So the latter gets angry because Holden described a baseball glove and not a house. For him that is the fact that he does everything wrong that he was expelled to. Then Holden takes the dissertation and he tears. After, Holden smokes in his bed while he knows that Strendlater dosn't like this. In fact he doesn't like that does not comply the regulations. Holden try then to have informations about the Strednlater's date with Jane who says him that they just stay in the Ed banky's car because Jane should return at her home at 9.30. Holden explain that Ed Banky is a Basket-ball teacher who have to give his car although it is forbidden because Strendlater is his favorite since he plays basket ball center. Holden thinks to know what happened and he hits but Strandlater is the strongest and beats Holden. Holden treats the later cretin since Strandlater doesn't like this. They continue to fight and Holden after this bleeds ned .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-01-2013 16:33
Message de caroliine91 posté le 12-01-2013 à 15:43:24 (S | E | F)
Bonjour,
J'ai passé du temps à le refaire..
Merci de me corriger s'il vous plaît. Est-ce que cette fois c'est grammaticalement correct ?
Je vous remercie.
Firstly in this chapter Holden says there are things he cannot remember like when Stradlater is return from his date with Jane. He says he was so worried that he does not remember but it is more likely that he looked out by the window.Strendlater don't say a word about his date but resquest immediately if Holden made his dissertation. So the latter gets angry because Holden described a baseball glove and not a house. For him that is the fact that he does everything wrong that he was expelled to. Then Holden takes the dissertation and he tears. After, Holden smokes in his bed while he knows that Strendlater dosn't like this. In fact he doesn't like that does not comply the regulations. Holden try then to have informations about the Strednlater's date with Jane who says him that they just stay in the Ed banky's car because Jane should return at her home at 9.30. Holden explain that Ed Banky is a Basket-ball teacher who have to give his car although it is forbidden because Strendlater is his favorite since he plays basket ball center. Holden thinks to know what happened and he hits but Strandlater is the strongest and beats Holden. Holden treats the later cretin since Strandlater doesn't like this. They continue to fight and Holden after this bleeds ned .
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Modifié par lucile83 le 12-01-2013 16:33
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