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Message de mar4gaux posté le 24-01-2013 à 21:31:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
pour lundi je dois faire un résumé des "Noces Funèbres" de Tim Burton. Pour l'instant j'ai déjà écrit un texte et j'aimerais bien que vous le corrigiez s'il vous plaît car il doit être bourré de fautes. ^^
Merci d'avance.
In the XIXth century, in a small village, Victor, a young man, is promised to a lady who is named Victoria. Quickly they fall in love; but Victoria's parents are very nasty and Victor is frightened to marry Victoria. In the dark black night, the moon is full and he goes to the sinister wood to rehearse to take the ring on his bride's finger. But, a strange skinny girl bolts from the blue. She is wearing a dirty white wedding dress and has 2 big blue eyes and a disproportionate chin. She takes Victor to the world of the dead. In a bar, skeletons, spiders and maggots are dancing and singing to the new arrival.
The corpse bride falls in love to Victor and wants him to marry her. She is sad because she is dead the day of her marriage. She has the heart broken.
During this time, Victoria is worried because his groom doesn't come back. She tells her parents but they don't want to listen her.
Victor wants to return to the world of the living to warn Victoria. Emily and him go to see a wizard. He gives them a potion (which has done in a cauldron) to rise from the dead. When Victoria sees Victor and Emily she is afraid and she tells the vicar (who lives in a Gothic church) to help them but he doesn't want.
Finally, Victor manages to return to the living world and marries Victoria. Butterflies fly away.
Merci encore et bon week-end
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-01-2013 21:48
Message de mar4gaux posté le 24-01-2013 à 21:31:55 (S | E | F)
Bonjour tout le monde,
pour lundi je dois faire un résumé des "Noces Funèbres" de Tim Burton. Pour l'instant j'ai déjà écrit un texte et j'aimerais bien que vous le corrigiez s'il vous plaît car il doit être bourré de fautes. ^^
Merci d'avance.
In the XIXth century, in a small village, Victor, a young man, is promised to a lady who is named Victoria. Quickly they fall in love; but Victoria's parents are very nasty and Victor is frightened to marry Victoria. In the dark black night, the moon is full and he goes to the sinister wood to rehearse to take the ring on his bride's finger. But, a strange skinny girl bolts from the blue. She is wearing a dirty white wedding dress and has 2 big blue eyes and a disproportionate chin. She takes Victor to the world of the dead. In a bar, skeletons, spiders and maggots are dancing and singing to the new arrival.
The corpse bride falls in love to Victor and wants him to marry her. She is sad because she is dead the day of her marriage. She has the heart broken.
During this time, Victoria is worried because his groom doesn't come back. She tells her parents but they don't want to listen her.
Victor wants to return to the world of the living to warn Victoria. Emily and him go to see a wizard. He gives them a potion (which has done in a cauldron) to rise from the dead. When Victoria sees Victor and Emily she is afraid and she tells the vicar (who lives in a Gothic church) to help them but he doesn't want.
Finally, Victor manages to return to the living world and marries Victoria. Butterflies fly away.
Merci encore et bon week-end
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Modifié par lucile83 le 24-01-2013 21:48
Réponse: Summary /Tim Burton de gerondif, postée le 27-01-2013 à 14:46:37 (S | E)
Bonjour,
In the XIXth century, in a small village, Victor, a young man, is promised to a lady who is named Victoria. Quickly they fall in love; but Victoria's parents are very nasty and Victor is frightened to(of + ing) marry Victoria. In the dark black night, the moon is full and he goes to the sinister wood to rehearse to take (1) ing, 2) mettre, pas prendre)the ring on his bride's finger. But, a strange skinny girl bolts from the blue. She is wearing a dirty white wedding dress and has 2 big blue eyes and a disproportionate chin. She takes Victor to the world of the dead. In a bar, skeletons, spiders and maggots are dancing and singing to the new arrival.
The corpse bride falls in love to(with) Victor and wants him to marry her. She is sad because she is dead (est un état, comme le bois du dossier de ma chaise: il est inerte, mort. Conjuguez le verbe d'action to die au prétérit)the day of her marriage. She has the heart broken(français traduit).
During this time(meanwhile serait mieux), Victoria is worried because his(son copain à elle!!) groom doesn't come back(plutôt en ing, ce n'est pas un présent d'habitude). She tells her parents but they don't want to listen to her.
Victor wants to return to the world of the living to warn Victoria. Emily and him(il faut un sujet, pas un cod) go to see a wizard. He gives them a potion (which he has done(fabriquer, confectionner, c'est to make) in a cauldron) to rise from the dead. When Victoria sees Victor and Emily she is afraid and she tells the vicar (who lives in a Gothic church) to help them but he doesn't want to.
Finally, Victor manages to return to the living world and marries Victoria. Butterflies fly away.
Réponse: Summary /Tim Burton de mar4gaux, postée le 27-01-2013 à 18:44:37 (S | E)
Merci beaucoup
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