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Message de barbituric posté le 25-01-2013 à 09:45:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je dois répondre à un client mais mon anglais est médiocre, seriez-vous assez sympathiques de bien vouloir me corriger ?
Dear Henry,
Thank you Henry and Kevin for your email and for the request.
I have speaking right now with Mr. X from APPLE and he told me that he will write me as soon as possible the technical specifications of the device in order to be able to send him an offer.
It will be my pleasure to inform you on this matter in the next few days.
Est-ce assez clair ?
Merci
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-01-2013 12:19
Message de barbituric posté le 25-01-2013 à 09:45:59 (S | E | F)
Bonjour à tous,
je dois répondre à un client mais mon anglais est médiocre, seriez-vous assez sympathiques de bien vouloir me corriger ?
Dear Henry,
Thank you Henry and Kevin for your email and for the request.
I have speaking right now with Mr. X from APPLE and he told me that he will write me as soon as possible the technical specifications of the device in order to be able to send him an offer.
It will be my pleasure to inform you on this matter in the next few days.
Est-ce assez clair ?
Merci
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Modifié par lucile83 le 25-01-2013 12:19
Réponse: Aide / réponse de lucile83, postée le 25-01-2013 à 13:40:43 (S | E)
Hello,
Les erreurs en bleu
Thank you Henry and Kevin for your email and
I have speaking right now with Mr. X from APPLE and he told me that he will write me as soon as possible the technical specifications of the device in order to be able to send him qui est him? an offer.
It will be my pleasure...autre tournure to inform you on this matter...trouver plus court et mieux in the next few days.
Réponse: Aide / réponse de barbituric, postée le 25-01-2013 à 16:25:00 (S | E)
I have spoken this morning with Mr. X from Apple and he told me that he will send me the technical specifications of the device as soon as possible, in order that I can write him the offer.(de façon à ce que je puisse lui faire une offre)
I will keep you informed on this matter in the next few days.
C'est mieux ?
Réponse: Aide / réponse de barbituric, postée le 25-01-2013 à 19:00:01 (S | E)
I have spoken this morning with Mr. X from Apple and he told me that he will send me the technical specifications of the device as soon as possible, in order that I can write him the offer.(de façon à ce que je puisse lui faire une offre)
I will keep you informed on this matter in the next few days.
Je raconte à quelqu'un d'autre que:
I have spoken this morning with Mr. X from Apple whose told me that he will send me the technical specifications of the device as soon as possible. I will then, send him the offer that he need.
Obviously I will keep you informed on this matter in the next few days
Réponse: Aide / réponse de barbituric, postée le 25-01-2013 à 22:46:15 (S | E)
I spoke this morning with Mr. X from Apple who told me that he will send me the technical specifications of the device as soon as possible. Once I receive this information, I will send the offer that he needs?) .I will inform you in a few days as to the status of this matter.( I will contact you in a few days with more information regarding this matter.)
Réponse: Aide / réponse de barbituric, postée le 25-01-2013 à 22:50:47 (S | E)
ou encore
Once I receive this information, I will send him the requested offer. I will contact you in a few days with more information regarding this matter.
Réponse: Aide / réponse de lucile83, postée le 25-01-2013 à 23:18:45 (S | E)
Hello,
Je vois que vous avez écrit un long monologue
Je reprends le dernier essai au vol:
I spoke this morning
Réponse: Aide / réponse de barbituric, postée le 26-01-2013 à 09:29:55 (S | E)
Bonjour,
On se débrouille comme on peut pour être visible
Un grand merci pour l'aide apportée. J'espère ne pas devenir envahissant les prochains jours mais j'ai envie d'en savoir plus.
Cordialement
Turic
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Modifié par lucile83 le 26-01-2013 09:50
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